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A Dance For Two

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A dance of two, dance of two, gold sun and moon, Granting sunrises, inky midnights, and afternoon. A dance of two, dance of two, ruby petals of June, With successive, hued seasons, ever coming soon. Gaiety in deep, powdery snow-pearly winter noon, And everlasting, jade springtime-pretty bird tune. A dance of two, dance of two, on fall skies maroon, When vivid colors rain, and tousled flowers swoon. Written on 10/5/2022 For: SINGLE STANZA MONORHYME Poetry Contest Sponsor: L MILTON HANKINS

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I Am Anaya

Date: 10/13/2022 9:39:00 AM

The SunMoon Dance is a part of the vision to bring peace to Mother Earth. Great energy and poetry, Evelyn and best for a win! Anaya

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/13/2022 12:03:00 PM

We could learn so much from nature. Although this poem didn't receive a win, I enjoyed the contest so much, and I am gratified by your appreciation. :)

Michael Tor

Date: 10/6/2022 7:59:00 PM

I think Milton will love this entry for his contest Evelyn. Best wishes in the contest. He is one of the best fair Judges to judge on Poetry Soup...

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/6/2022 8:58:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words and vote of confidence, Michael. I've been in Milton's contests before, and I agree that he is extremely fair. Blessings :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/6/2022 8:52:00 AM

Great feeling , and imagery in this verse. Many blessings friend. Good luck in the contest

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/6/2022 11:53:00 AM

Thank you for your gladdening comments, Eve. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2022 6:31:00 AM

WoW! Judy, This is a lovely monorhyme. Your phrases are top notch and your imagery is outstanding!Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/6/2022 11:55:00 AM

Thank you so much for the joy of your warm remarks, Alexis. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn :)

Deb M

Date: 10/6/2022 2:18:00 AM

The Nature Queen strikes again! Love this poem Evelyn…Debx

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/6/2022 11:56:00 AM

Your kind words bring smiles, Deb. Thank you. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/5/2022 6:44:00 PM

Lovely poem, Evelyn, with positive rays and a happy ambiance. I enjoyed reading your writing, best wishes for the contest.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/5/2022 7:57:00 PM

Thank you very much for your positive, gladdening remarks. I'm pleased to know you enjoyed my poem. My very best wishes, Evelyn