Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet ABC

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A Damsel Enchants Felicity

A  DAMSEL  ENCHANTS  FELICITY



Aurora breaks,

Cinderella  damsel  enchants  felicity,

gliding   halcyon--

implanting   jazzy  kisses,

languorous murmurs. . . 

Nectared  opulent  press

quakes  reactions.

Succulent  tissues  urge

virginal  wanting:  xerothermic,

yearning zenith!
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*** xerothermic -- adapted to or flourishing to environment that is hot and dry
      halcyon -- care -free
  
CONTEST NAME: 10 OR LESS LINES
Contest Sponsor: Rob
~~2nd place~~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo
2:28 pm, September 23, 2015

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Edlynn Nau October 18, 2015 at 11:34 PM Just plain fun! It was clever and told the story & images exactly! SUPER WRITE!

Skat A October 16, 2015 at 9:32 PM Olive, Congratulations on your win. -SKAT-

Andrea Dietrich October 16, 2015 at 7:48 PM wait a second. this was not a screwed contest. So I bet it won before then. SUre hope so!!!

Andrea Dietrich October 16, 2015 at 7:47 PM oh my, it did not win before? BIG congrats this time round. I really love this one.

James Inman October 15, 2015 at 9:02 AM Nicely done Olive.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 15, 2015 at 2:03 AM Congrats on superb win Olive with this wonderful write! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 27, 2015 at 1:42 AM thanks much Dr. Upma.. =`)

Michael Tor October 15, 2015 at 12:44 AM Olive congrats on your win!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 5, 2015 at 1:17 AM thanks much Michael.. =`)

Alexis Y. October 14, 2015 at 8:51 PM Olive, congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 5, 2015 at 1:09 AM thanks much Alexis..=`)

Robert Lindley October 14, 2015 at 8:29 PM WONDERFULLY CREATIVE! Congrats on your win my friend! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 4, 2015 at 12:15 AM thanks much robert.. =`)

Bl Devnath September 27, 2015 at 2:43 PM Expressed in exceptional and genius style. My favorite poem and favorite poetess. 7+ and loved always my lovely friend,bl Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 27, 2015 at 7:38 AM thanks much BL..=`) boosting me to write more and more.. =`)

Justin Bordner September 25, 2015 at 8:03 PM Your language is luscious, your felicity so fertile. I surge with heated hypersensitivity great Poetess. To your zenith I indulge with zest. "Nectared opulent press..." that first flavor of lust is so mighty an urge. This poem is hot and intelligent, very efficient in it's turn on power Olive...J.A.B. A FAV!! Awesome style! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 13, 2015 at 10:34 PM Justin, I want to express my sincerest appreciation to your ever generous comment that encourages me to write and write more.. =`) ~Olive Eloisa

Emile Pinet September 25, 2015 at 9:17 AM The ability to bend words to any shape through poetry is frustrating, difficult and mind numbing, but when you get it right, others see the magic and it's all worth it. Well done. Emile. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 4, 2015 at 1:42 AM Emile, thank you if somehow the way I bended the words here made you see magic.. =`) thanks.. =`)

Sandra Haight September 24, 2015 at 8:11 PM Wonderful, Olive! You mastered this difficult challenge very well! Love it. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 4, 2015 at 1:40 AM Sandra, thank you for your generous comment.. =`) but I just tried this form.. this is actually my first try.. =`)

Andrea Dietrich September 23, 2015 at 9:35 PM wowowow!! That is GOOD work. Makes me want to try this contest too!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 1, 2015 at 2:58 AM thanks much Andrea.. =`)

Bl Devnath September 23, 2015 at 8:04 PM Firstly Good luck for contest with this wonderful poem. Amazing and exquisite both. 7 and My favorite poem. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 1, 2015 at 2:58 AM thanks much my friend.. =`) I m glad you like my poem.. =`)

Tim Smith September 23, 2015 at 4:04 PM Always amazed how you can get these types of poems to flow so well...good luck Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 28, 2015 at 5:16 AM Thanks much Tim.. I was really challenged by the theme and the form.. and i really like such it makes me think... =`)

Nette Onclaud September 23, 2015 at 3:51 PM you woke up my senses, eloi.. so fine.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 28, 2015 at 2:30 AM Thanks much Nette.. =`)

Jan Allison September 23, 2015 at 2:34 PM wonderful sensual ABC Olive good luck in the contest:-) hugs janxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 27, 2015 at 12:01 AM Jan thanks much.. =`)

James Fraser September 23, 2015 at 1:38 PM Written beautifully, displayed wonderfully little one. Loved it's sensuous flow, mmmm ;-) Always enjoying your poetry to grow, flow <3 good luck in the contest, hugs from your Huge One xxx James Fraser September 30, 2015 at 2:55 PM Your a lovely beginner little one ;-) xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 26, 2015 at 11:46 PM Each time I consider myself as a beginner Huge James and you know that.. I considering myself as a beginner each time I write makes me more interested in giving more.. =`)

Constance La France September 23, 2015 at 11:51 AM Olive, beautifully penned and I love, love your layout, best of luck and thanks for visiting my poem, erotic ... Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 26, 2015 at 11:32 PM Thanks much Broken Wings.. =`)

Michael Tor September 23, 2015 at 10:44 AM Olive this is over the top. Wow this is a even. Cleverly written! Love the imagery. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 26, 2015 at 11:30 PM Thank you so much Michael.. I appreciate you dropping by.. =`) I just bite the challenge of the Sponsor and gave my best shot.. =`)

Miraj Raha September 23, 2015 at 10:35 AM It must have taken some time and thinking to craft this beautiful poem.Wonderful form,and impressive words. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 25, 2015 at 5:21 AM Actually not that long time.. =`) sometimes when i see something and thoughts rush in it happens like this.. =`) its in the letter xyz that i took time. Hehehe

Joseph May September 23, 2015 at 7:38 AM Beautiful write Olive...You made it look easy... best wishes in the contest... Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 24, 2015 at 5:47 AM Thank you so much Joseph... =`) weeeeee maybe I wrote this poem in just three hours as of course I changed one line as well.. =`) thanks.

Mark Woods September 23, 2015 at 2:40 AM Very, very well done. Top of the class here, you have penned a heavenly abc. Well done Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 23, 2015 at 7:51 AM Thanks much Mark Woods, this another topic that I'm quite having second thoughts writing.. However, I like the challenge of finding words and their meaning to fit each letter.. :D See the words I used, none is two letter word... I use the letter at its fullest... =`) i like what i learned today.. :D!~Olive Eloisa