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A Crimson Sky

Oh how I wish I could buy, the huge beautiful sky. By day with bright white and blue so high, and the sunny sun makes me want to cry. By night the colors change making a roar, "A crimson sky breaks the distant shore."

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Karen Jones

Date: 5/23/2025 10:16:00 AM

Back to say hurray for your vivid Crimson Sky write and congratulations on your win as well!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/23/2025 10:58:00 AM

Thanks for coming back for a visit and for your Congratulations. It is always great to see you here. Glad you enjoyed my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write again. Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/23/2025 9:05:00 AM

"3 Place" A Crimson Sky ~ Date Written:5/12/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet....

Joseph May

Date: 5/22/2025 3:20:00 PM

Lovely write Paula, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/23/2025 9:04:00 AM

Thanks for coming for a visit and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write to be a, Lovely write. Thanks for having this contest and for my placement. I enjoyed writing this one for your contest. Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/22/2025 1:09:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/23/2025 9:02:00 AM

Thanks for coming for a visit and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write again. Always great to see you here. Hugs... Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/17/2025 10:01:00 PM

Breathtakingly beautiful, Paula! No matter what the sky cost, you'd still be rich! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/18/2025 1:27:00 PM

Thanks for coming for a visit. Glad you found my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write to be, Breathtakingly beautiful. Guess it is a good thing the pretty sky is free for all to enjoy. Hooray!!! Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Karen Jones

Date: 5/17/2025 1:31:00 PM

Lovely poem a pleasure to read Paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/18/2025 1:25:00 PM

Thanks for coming for a visit. Glad you found my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write to be a, Lovely poem a pleasure to read. That makes me happy... Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2025 4:27:00 PM

You did it in only one stanza. I chose that same line for my poem

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2025 1:31:00 PM

Thanks for coming for a visit. Glad you enjoyed my colorful "A Crimson Sky." It was fun to write. Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/15/2025 3:05:00 PM

I was swept awat by all the nes!! For some reason, your last line is absolyets the best. Hie me like a magic craon thet blew my mind! Thanks. Hogs, Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2025 1:30:00 PM

Thanks for coming for a visit. Glad you enjoyed my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write. I love the pretty sky by day or by night. Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/13/2025 7:04:00 PM

Powerful penning here, Paula. Excelsior, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 11:03:00 AM

Thanks for coming for a visit. Glad you enjoyed reading my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write and found it to be a, Powerful penning. I love the beauty of the sky. Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

David Crandall

Date: 5/13/2025 5:46:00 PM

Beautiful poem - I'll give you the sky for a reasonable price - lol!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 10:51:00 AM

Thanks for coming for a visit. Glad you enjoyed reading my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write and found it to be a, Beautiful poem. What is your price for the sky??? I will need to check my piggy bank. Hahaha!!! Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Ink Empress

Date: 5/13/2025 9:45:00 AM

Awwn your love for nature and warmth and colors that paint the sky, from the sun’s rays youv expressed so well here dear paula! Beautiful! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/13/2025 1:25:00 PM

Thanks for coming for a visit. Glad you enjoyed reading my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write and found it to be, Beautiful. I loved writing this one. Yes, I do love nature in all of it's beauty. Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/12/2025 10:56:00 PM

Sky high! You soar with this one. Well done, Paula! Best of luck in contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/13/2025 1:21:00 PM

Thanks for coming for a visit and for your Best of luck in contest. Glad you enjoyed my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write. I loved writing this sky high one. Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Crystol Woods

Date: 5/12/2025 12:31:00 PM

Beautiful! I'm trying to write one for this and choose the same line! :)<3 xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/13/2025 1:19:00 PM

Thanks for coming for a visit. Glad you found my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write to be, Beautiful. I loved writing about the colorful sky. Good Luck with what you write. Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2025 12:06:00 PM

- The sky is not for sale, Paula ... we all want to enjoy it ... - A lovely poem :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/13/2025 1:16:00 PM

Thanks for coming for a visit and for your good luck in the contest. Glad you found my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write to be, A lovely poem. Oh no, do not tell me the sky is not for sale. I thought I could buy it. Hahaha!!! Hugs... It was fun writing this one. Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/12/2025 10:55:00 AM

You chose the same theme, but yours is more attractive. Very well crafted, good luck with the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/13/2025 1:08:00 PM

Thanks for coming for a visit and for your good luck with the contest. Glad you found my colorful "A Crimson Sky" write to be, Very well crafted. I loved writing this one. I will need to check your page out. Good Luck with it. Enjoy the blessings from the colorful sky as you write away.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/12/2025 10:22:00 AM

A Crimson Sky ~ Date Written:5/12/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet....