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A Concrete Heart

why was he so hard to love, never an emotion shown. seldom a smile, a soft touch was unknown. he had a concrete heart unreachable lonely sad 3/27/18 Something Concrete Maureen McGreavy

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/4/2018 9:16:00 PM

Sweet, Mike. Congrats on your win.

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/5/2018 3:57:00 AM

Thanks Line xxoo

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/4/2018 12:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this simple but beautiful presentation of a concrete heart. Clever and creative! :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/4/2018 1:11:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/4/2018 6:13:00 AM

Tender piece, I should have known it was yours Mike :) lovely done. Congratulations on your win in my first ever contest! xomo!

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/4/2018 10:16:00 AM

Thanks so much Maureen, congrats on your first contest, it was a winner xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/16/2018 2:32:00 PM

Hello Mike, this poem must be hard to shape. This person in your poem I think does not know how to love.because he did not meet the right person yet. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2018 9:03:00 AM

Happy Monday to you to. xxx-ooo Have a nice day my friend.

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/16/2018 3:10:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene. Yes, perhaps if he meets the right person, he will open up , Happy Monday xxoo

Akkina Downing

Date: 4/1/2018 8:53:00 AM

Although it's sad but what a beautiful shape heart. Fabulous Mike... Hugs :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/1/2018 9:31:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Akkina xxoo

Yazmin Malik

Date: 3/29/2018 7:43:00 AM

Heart shape is very creative and nice words to add to this poem :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/29/2018 8:39:00 AM

Thank you so much, Yazmin, I really appreciate your visit and comments xxoo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/28/2018 3:35:00 PM

So sad--but so well-written, Mike!

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/28/2018 3:40:00 PM

Thank you Janice xxoo

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/27/2018 3:56:00 PM

pulsing poem with great artform, mike... enjoyed this brief yet meaningful work!...huggs

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2018 8:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Nette, you are very kind xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2018 3:10:00 PM

- A heartbeat in great shape, Mike :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2018 3:27:00 PM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise, enjoy the evening XXX000

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/27/2018 2:17:00 PM

A shape of gentle heart ..made of concrete..good imagination, Mike!

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2018 2:22:00 PM

Thanks so much, Vijay, I appreciate your notice !!

Silent One

Date: 3/27/2018 1:40:00 PM

Oh a sad heart, nice shape making my friend..

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2018 1:56:00 PM

Thanks SO, Happy Tuesday Evening !!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/27/2018 11:44:00 AM

You have described this well Mike. A well written concrete poem. Good luck in the contest :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2018 12:02:00 PM

Thank you so much, Heidi xxoo Happy Tuesday !! again!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/27/2018 10:04:00 AM

Nicely done, Mike! A concrete heart indeed!

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2018 10:10:00 AM

Thanks so much, Kim Happy Tuesday xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 3/27/2018 9:55:00 AM

Heart of stone or heart of concrete its such a sad scenario and can be impossible to break through these emotional barriers:-( Brilliantly penned concrete poem Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2018 10:01:00 AM

Thank you Jan, I really appreciate your kind words XXOO

Judith S

Date: 3/27/2018 9:42:00 AM

Loved this Mike!! Especially the forming of the words into an image. A concrete heart ... such an interesting concept. I feel I've know people like this. Best of luck in the contest!! ~ Judy

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2018 10:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Judy, Happy Tuesday xxoo