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Oh, how I dreamed of romance, and then, he asked me to the dance; I bragged of my dancing and my twirling, yet, in his strong arms I suddenly went swirling; and all dreams of romance ended as he went whirling, the object of my love was left crawling ! ________________________________ December 4, 2019 Poetry/Narrative/A Comic Vignette Copyright Protected, ID 19-1205-265-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for FGI Blog Series 22 - comic Brian Strand Podium Place 1

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Date: 12/4/2019 6:09:00 PM
Haha, thanks for a good laugh. A real rib-tickler.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/6/2019 8:28:00 PM
ML, thanks for the compliment, I am actually terrible at funny poems so this is somewhat of a miracle !
Date: 12/4/2019 12:01:00 PM
Oh my, but that fantasy became a nightmare! Comedic for sure.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/4/2019 5:47:00 PM
Lin, thanks so much for visiting and for your comment, appreciate !
Date: 12/4/2019 11:34:00 AM
Well done and good luck in the contest Panagiota
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Constance La France
Date: 12/4/2019 5:49:00 PM
Panagiota, thanks for the compliment, appreciate !

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