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A Collaborated Love

in the moorland amidst the scores of heather soft touches of amber silents fall from heaven's light within the gossamer breeze daylight violets sway drawing memories out in a thought by chance we come together as a petal's fold sipping thoughts like morning dew where there is love there are fades of hope I sit below the millpond watching moonflowers close within the misty morn my blushed reflections glance back in custom stares as love comes here i feel you rise and fall in the cadence of breaths from the depths of my soul where there are lingers of love's committed grace our caring faith is hidden beneath winds of fate oh to stop the hands of time and feel your hands atop mine o love, of love let us write nigh come together again, for all lost times fingering more than this pen while caressing rhymes as i am writing this love letter from the calvary of mind shall we write together the distance of time? elaborate streams of verse collaborate a metaphor of more than letters and somber words on faded sheets of white come write with me within the edges of my soul be the folds of dawn as amber hues silents night the breath behind daylight violet's sway the custom stares in pond's reflection when love comes here my hearts skips along life's journey of love's committed grace undying within my soul where there is still caring faith and the chance we come together upon my dying days writing this love letter alone for old times, for all times in hopes that we shall write together beyond the hues of azure skies on calvary we shall collaborate without letters and words within the sighs of love as my breath draws its final sigh let us elaborate forbidden feelings in fields of forget-me-nots o love of love let us write nigh shall we rise then fall where this is love from the depths of souls where the fragrance of love beckons there is promise of tomorrow when too my eyes close in eternal darkness only then shall we rest on more than sheets of white where thoughts crumble like paper as tears fill the voids of streams with my sorrow August 19, 2019 Let Us Collaborate a Love Verse Poetry Contest Sponsored by James Edward Lee Sr.

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/30/2019 1:24:00 PM

Awesome job weaving James words with yours, congratulations on your winning placement.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2019 7:05:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve...it was a fun challenge :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2019 10:42:00 AM

Congratultions, dear. Your entry was outstanding.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2019 11:35:00 AM

Thank you so much, when i looked the other day it said n/a so this took me by surprise... hugs :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/29/2019 12:37:00 PM

A beautiful write, dear Sandra! Congratulations!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/29/2019 12:53:00 PM

Thank you Kim I wasn’t aware it was posted when I looked no list was up yet :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2019 8:31:00 PM

oh my gosh, Sandy. No way can I compete with this one!! You made it look so good and so easy. AT least I have another week to try again.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/15/2019 8:36:00 PM

Thank you for the compliment my friend :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/25/2019 6:56:00 AM

I think you can drop the mike, Sandra. I was going to highlight my favorite parts, but they were ALL my favorite parts!

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/25/2019 11:07:00 AM

Thank you Caren...not often my muse pens romance, it usually hides in life's darker tones and writes painful emotion, this was a fun write... hugs :)

John Gondolf

Date: 8/20/2019 8:40:00 AM

Wow, Sandy, what a beautiful captivating write. You took the sponsors words and made it sooo much more. Best of luck in the contest, this is a winner in my book. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/20/2019 9:45:00 AM

Thank you John, not often my muse turns towards love writes so i was very pleased with the end result... hugs :)

Chris Green

Date: 8/20/2019 7:36:00 AM

"where thoughts crumble like paper as tears fill the voids of streams with my sorrow" Love this line This was incredibly beautiful and filled with such love and desire. Your poem was alluring and enchanting. Best wishes in the contest

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/20/2019 9:44:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris, it was a long thought out process to get it where i wanted it :) hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/20/2019 6:11:00 AM

Your poem is outstanding, every word is placed just so, to give us a delightful view. Your soul became unloosed to write this poignant verse dear Sandra. Winning wishes are being sent your way, Love xo

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/20/2019 9:43:00 AM

thank you, this one took some deep thought and time but i liked how it turned out...i almost used all the letters allowed in one poem...by far my longest write :) hugs

David Mchattie

Date: 8/19/2019 6:46:00 PM

Lovely poem. You are a real romantic my friend. Have a great day.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/19/2019 7:24:00 PM

Thank you David, but James' contest with the love verses pulled this one out of me...my muse normal writes in sadder, darker tones, but i guess it's inside me somewhere...in person i can be romantic, just never seems to surface in my poems... thanks for the visit and comment! :) hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/19/2019 5:07:00 PM

What a brilliant collaboration you've written Sandra, you've given this a lot of thought. Good luck in the contest, I'm sure it will do we'll. Tom.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/19/2019 5:45:00 PM

Thank you Tom I almost used all the characters allowed in this write. It took many hours to compose :) hugs