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A Christmas Miracle

Christmas Eve and he worked late again. As he trod through drifts of pristine snow, he saw a bottle passed among homeless men. Two months mortgage he did owe; Fear of living on the street filled him with woe. Shops had closed early; except for Christmas lights his path was dark. He had no gifts for his wife Shirley and his children would wake to a tree so stark. He shivered in the roaring winds of winter’s bark. It was then he looked up and saw the light – a huge star shaped like a cross. The lower beam shone so bright that he followed it until a church he came across and the manger in front of it gave him pause. Nestled up next to Jesus in the crib bed was a golden retriever lying peacefully. Tied round the dog was a velvet sack scarlet red and he neared the manger ever so cautiously hoping he’d found the perfect gift for his family. He picked up the dog, but the untied sack grew, filled with gifts with name tags for all his clan. There was money in a card with his name on it too. A fearful soul might have turned and ran, but the card read, “Merry Christmas from the Savior of man.” *Entry for Francine's English Quintain Contest, written on November 30, 2011.

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Date: 12/16/2012 8:27:00 AM
Wow !!What a great story you had penned here Carolyn!How are you.Wish you Merry Christmas in advance.
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Date: 12/19/2011 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your super 7th place in Francine's "English Quintain" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/17/2011 10:41:00 PM
Beautiful story Carolyn. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/17/2011 9:18:00 PM
lovely story told, congrats on your 7th place win in the contest Carolyn
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Date: 11/30/2011 1:22:00 PM
Beautiful piece, my friend. I'm sure Francine will love this one
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Date: 11/30/2011 1:20:00 PM
Hi my lady, I know it's been awhile but your poem again is very good, How is your health, right now I'm in dier straights financially, I just had another operation and it went well the Lord was with me, that is why I haven't posted any poems recently, right now I'm in danger of going bankrupt, I'm usimg the library computer, health costs have made a tremendous burden on me, but I have a house now two glasses, two dishes etc, Have to wait for two weeks till my next check then I will be alright.G.B.
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Date: 11/30/2011 12:06:00 PM
Beautiful and so nice it is that got the great Prize. Loved it and enjoyed it, my friend. bl
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Date: 11/30/2011 10:54:00 AM
Yes. Dogs can be the bearer of gifts. Think of the St. Bernard with a flask tied round his neck, searching for some poor lost soul. Love this poem. Love, daver
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Date: 11/30/2011 10:56:00 AM
Terrible English. I beg your pardon, you being an expert on the language. It should be - A dog can be bearer of gifts. How's that?
Date: 11/30/2011 9:36:00 AM
a very uplifting poem. wonderful story and message. just lovely :) soupmail
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Date: 11/29/2011 7:23:00 PM
Only God could have pulled off an ending like this one, huh, Carolyn? A vignette of how all things work together for good-to those who love the Lord. This is gorgeous....just gorgeous! I will check out your contest too....Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 11/29/2011 6:12:00 PM
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Date: 11/29/2011 5:29:00 PM
This was beautiful, Carolyn. Best wishes in the contest. Kim
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Date: 11/29/2011 4:12:00 PM
Carolyn, hello i m not a poet but this is a very true Christmasy poem the chef said you were a very beautiful woman and your picture verifies that i just got back from hospital Chef's doing ok but i hate seeing him with tubes in his nose and mouth ivs in both arms and a oxogen tent over the bed I could only stay a couple hrs your a doctor right they took the tubes out and shut the tent down while i was there good luck in the contest hope you win Chef said to comment on all comments kenny
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Date: 11/29/2011 3:03:00 PM
* "I Had To Wipe A Tear From My Eyes So I Could The Keys * My Dear Precious, Blessed & Beautiful Carolyn * Your Beautiful Poem Touched My Heart Deeply * I Love Beautiful Love * In All Its Shapes & Glories * As I Shall Enter This Christmas Seaons Masterpiece Into My Favourites * I Shall Also Place The Image of Your Hearts Beauty There * Warmth Aside The Firesplace * Sooo Very Beautiful * My Luv, Forever & Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/29/2011 2:14:00 PM
sadly this is true for some.... with no real gifts.... great write! Did you see the poem I wrote for you?
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Date: 11/29/2011 2:11:00 PM
Looks like another winner to me, Carolyn. It's good to read your poetry again.
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