A Chasm In Soup Creek

All heads are bowed in Soup Creek today
The town’s elder statesman has passed on his way
A gentleman true whose tongue wasn’t forked
To whom people listened whenever he talked 

But when others spoke he would cheer or applaud
Whatever their nation, whomever their Lord
His words rarely barbed and only when apt 
And usually only when friends were attacked

The name of this man, held so high in the rankings
None other than L (call me Milt) Milton Hankins
A man of belief with a deep ingrained faith
Who found time aplenty for each stray and waif

It’s quiet today in the town of Soup Creek
There’s a humungous chasm… so to speak 
It’s like something’s missing for one and for all
It’s like someone’s stolen the church and town hall

Soup Creek, a town with its spirit ripped out
But Milton left town as a man in no doubt 
That Soup Creek would thrive on his foundations laid
His legacy being the friends that he’d made

A sage and a mentor whose work here is done
A scribe with adventures, brand new, just begun
I dreamed in the night that a light lit his land
And his good lady wife said, “Milt, take my hand.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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John Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 2:06 AM
An interesting situation in Soup Creek, Terry, and a good read. Thank you.
Hawkins Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 3:36 PM
A perfect tribute to a loved and respected gentleman. I miss him. That is beautifully put, Terry. Take care and Happy New Year. Shirley
Flood Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 3:39 PM
Thank you, Shirley. It’s been said that my words have spoken for many. If that is so, then I’m humbled. A happy new year to you too. Terry
Watt Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 8:24 PM
Brilliant, Terry. Fighting back a tear. It's been a hard year for us at Poetry Soup. Love your positive vibe in this poem, though our cup is a little less full, we still have Milt's poems and comments to keep his memory and legacy alive. "The town’s elder statesman has passed on his way". Congrats, and warm wishes for a happy new year, my friend ~ John
Flood Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 2:58 PM
Thanks so much, John. Writing the unfunny is almost alien to me, so it took ages to start anything that didn’t go straight to trash. ultimately I was delighted to write something worthy of posting and astounded at the response my words received. If there is an ‘upstairs’ I hope Milt has a big smug grin on his face. Terry
Nicole Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 8:23 PM
My eyes are misty with your final thought. Even though we miss Milton more than words can express, we know he missed his wife so much. He's where he wanted to be. Still, it leaves our hearts feeling empty. Your thoughts caress softly around me. Let's keeping writing and lifting other's up. Milton would want us to continue on. Congratulations Terry, on Poem of the Day. My best to you, in the New Year. Hugs, Brandy
Flood Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 3:05 PM
Thank you, Brandy. So many people have said ‘it’s where Milt wanted to be’ that his passing seems somehow easier. Have a great 2023. Terry
Wolf Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 4:23 PM
That (last couplet) sure is a sweet denouement, Terry. Congratulations on POTD! ~ Gershon
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 5:08 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Wife, partner, friend or parent, wouldn’t that be a departure to warmly welcome? Terry
Gorelick Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 3:09 PM
You really caught the essence of our dear departed friend. His generous poems will long be remembered as will this kind man. Congratulations on your POTD! Robert
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 5:04 PM
I’m sure you’re right, Robert. Thank you. Terry
Sands Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 1:46 PM
Congratulations for this special POTD :)
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 5:04 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Appreciated. Terry
Andresen Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 1:21 PM
- Soup Creek will honor this man...he will never be forgotten - Congratulations on your lovely p.o.t.d., Terry - Happy New Year - Anne-Lise :)
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 5:03 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. I’m sure Milt will live on in our hearts and minds and in these pages for new Soupers to discover. A happy new year to you too. Terry
Poet Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved POTD, Terry. A beautiful tribute to a friend we all going to miss, RIP, Milt. Thanks for your great poem.
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 4:47 PM
And thank you, Sotto. We should remember Milt for so many reasons, not least his poetry. I’m guessing he’s up there now asking his Deb to pass him a pen. I hope so. Terry
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 11:28 AM
A wonderful dream, at the end. Gave me chills! Terry, Congrats on POTD! <3
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 4:40 PM
Thank you, Kim. I would so love to think it happened exactly like that. Terry
Scorpio Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 10:57 AM
I feel so much beautiful emotion with everything I read of yours Terry! Congratulations on once again making us all think. And leaving us all in awe of you <3
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 4:38 PM
You say the nicest things A.S. You can call again. Seriously, I was damned near fretting as each write I tried failed to encompass the essence of Milt. This really was pretty much a last chance saloon. Glad I stuck it out. Terry
Anaya Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 9:06 AM
Again, I'm tearing up, what should have gone up before yesterday! I know Jenna would agree with me on that! "It’s like something’s missing for one and for all" You'd better believe it! Congratulations on your POTD Terry Flood!!! A beautiful tribute to a man of INTEGRITY. RIP MILTON ~Anaya
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 4:34 PM
Thank you so much, Anaya. When I posted this I thought a few Soup Creekers might enjoy it. However, the response has been overwhelming and I’m so pleased about that. Terry
Baker Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations, Terry, on your POTD. Well written thoughts of a fine man. Enjoy your special day. Bill
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 4:28 PM
Milt was clearly a hugely respected man. No surprise to anyone here though. Nice to hear from you, Bill. Terry
Proxenos Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Terry my friend I do agree with all you say in your awesome poem you wrote about Milton. He was an honest, good, down to earth, salt of the earth kind of person. We only started exchanging comments this year - Congratulations by the score for this sad but excellent write for which you were awarded with the honor of POTD. I am deeply sorry at his passing, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 4:25 PM
I think you may have just said it all better than I, Jennifer. Thanks for your congratulations. Terry
Roper Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 8:21 AM
Wonderful tribute to Milt, Terry. Congratulations on POTD. Many blessings my friend
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 4:24 PM
Glad it ‘worked’ for you, Eve. Many thanks for your congrats. Terry
Lawrence Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 7:57 AM
Just lovely ! What a tribute to Milt honoring his legacy , sage advice and kindness to all . Rest in Peace Milt .Great job Terry ! Congratulations on POTD ! Susan :)
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 4:21 PM
Thank you, Susan. In spite of the circumstances surrounding this poem, it’s been humbling to have given so many the chance to air their thoughts and feelings toward Milt. Terry
Doll Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Terry, a beautiful tribute to Milt. He was a great member of poetry soup. He would be honored by your poem. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 11:58 AM
He was that, Warren, and all these comments and other tributes underline the fact. Thanks for your congrats. Terry
Fowler Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 6:55 AM
This is a powerful tribute Terry. Nicely done. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD.
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 11:55 AM
Thank you, Linda. It’s weird thinking that ordinarily, Milt would have been among the first with his congratulations. It’ll take some getting used too. Terry
Goldsmith Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! What a wonderful tribute/story/write to Milton. Love your ending. He talked about her from time to time. Guess they are back together. Have a great/blessed New Year 2023.................
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Would dearly love to have used Deb’s name but the rhyme wasn’t having any of it. I seem to have got away with it. It would be a pretty poor hereafter if loved ones don’t reconnect, so here’s hoping. Thank you, Paula. Terry
May Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 6:05 AM
A beautiful tribute to Milton, He made this site a much better place. He will be missed, Congrats on POTD Terry
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 11:43 AM
He sure will, Joseph. Thank you. Terry
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 6:03 AM
Dear Terry, your tribute to Milton brought tears to my eyes again! You have described his personality and his passing in a beautiful poem. "a humungous chasm…" so true indeed. Rest in peace, Milt. Congratulations on your POTD honour, Terry.
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 11:41 AM
Thank you, Malabika. It’s an honour with a sharp edge, but I am grateful to have received it. Glad my poem worked for you. Terry
Lane Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 5:57 AM
When you posted this, my comment was, "worthy of being faved." Even more worthy of being recognized as todays Poem of the Day. Its sentiments touch so many of us. Congratulations, Terry.
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 11:35 AM
Thanks again, Lin. It is heartening to see all the praise and positive vibes for Milt. He has certainly made his mark in Soup. Let’s hope it proves to be indelible. Terry
La France Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 5:36 AM
Terry, your tribute to Milt, is so beautiful, he was all you write to many. My heart has been heavy these past days, he touched my heart and so has your poem. Congratulations on your deserving POEM OF THE DAY, Constance
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 11:28 AM
Thanks, Constance. Took a fair few discarded attempts, but when I took the Soup Creek approach, suddenly it all came together. Happy it found favour, unhappy to have had cause to write it. Terry
George Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 4:11 AM
So beautifully written honoring a great poet and a great man . He will live long through his verse. Your beautifully rhyming poem though began on a tragic tone has ended on a happy note with his partner in Heaven offering her hand. Congratulations Terry on this well deserved POTD
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 11:05 AM
Thank you, Valsa. It’s hard to imagine Milt’s face gradually moving down the leader board. Alas, it’s inevitable. Terry
Seeker Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 3:57 AM
Beautiful tribute to our dear Milt ~ may he RIP ~ congratulations on POTD, Terry … prayers
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 9:18 AM
Thank you US. I’ve read many glowing tributes to Milt, your own included. All could have justified POTD, so I’m pleased with the honour. Terry
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