Kelly Deschler Poet Etheree

A Change of Heart - Etheree

Change

                      had brought

                          October

                     and you to me.

             With words from a heart

              so far from my own, but

        still so close when I read them,

   feel them, see them, bringing changes.

         I, like the leaves, am falling fast,  

hoping that you, like the earth, will catch me.









September 23rd, 2015

"For Love Of October" contest

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James Inman February 22, 2018 at 7:06 AM A lovely write. Kelly Deschler April 1, 2018 at 7:19 PM Thank you very, very much :)

Funom Makama May 26, 2016 at 1:22 PM A wonderful piece. I love this beautiful share Kelly Deschler June 14, 2016 at 10:20 PM Thank you, Funom. I am so glad you liked this one :)

Elaine George February 22, 2016 at 4:06 AM A Great etheree, Kelly. Love the last two lines. Elaine Kelly Deschler March 11, 2016 at 12:44 PM Thank you very much, Elaine. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem :)

Keith Bickerstaffe January 22, 2016 at 10:28 PM Such a beautiful flow to this one... lovely phrasing and imagery Kelly. Well done! Best wishes, Keith Kelly Deschler February 1, 2016 at 8:51 PM I appreciate your nice comments, Keith. Thank you very much!

Debbie Guzzi November 3, 2015 at 6:52 PM wow better & bettwr Kelly! Light & Love Kelly Deschler November 13, 2015 at 7:16 PM Thank you, Debbie! I appreciate your encouragement. It means a lot to get a "wow" from you :)

Funom Makama October 30, 2015 at 7:57 AM splendid``` great``` beautiful``` awesome and well expressed. As always, beautiful lines from a creative mind. Definitely a 7 Kelly Deschler November 7, 2015 at 10:34 PM Thank you so much, Funom. I truly appreciate your always kind comments!

Beautiful Scars October 20, 2015 at 8:33 PM Wow! Powerful in such few words. I love the fall so any analogy about leaves, or crisp breezes I adore. Great job :) -LU Kelly Deschler November 3, 2015 at 5:40 PM Thank you so much, Laura... Fall is my favorite season and it has been wonderful to see so many Autumn themed poems being posted here :)

Eric Boddie October 20, 2015 at 7:57 PM I will catch you, I couldn't stand to see you fall....your words never fail to glorify your wall....your talents touch hearts while piercing the mind....every time I read, I am glad I took the time....;) Kelly Deschler November 3, 2015 at 5:22 PM I really appreciate your lovely comments and kind words, Eric. Thank you! :)

Arthur Vaso October 12, 2015 at 7:48 PM Hi came back to read this a few times, just thought be nice to let you know!! Loved this poem! Kelly Deschler October 14, 2015 at 11:56 PM Hi there Arthur, thanks for coming back to read my poem once again. So glad to know you are enjoying it :)

Nette Onclaud October 7, 2015 at 12:32 PM this is charmingly designed and expressed, dear kelly...i like the impact of your last line... very nice!.. huggs Kelly Deschler October 14, 2015 at 4:12 PM Thank you for reading, Nette. I really appreciate your nice comments, as always :)

Cecilia Macfarlane October 4, 2015 at 9:05 PM Love this terrific write of yours Kelly. Bearing ones heart is a strong trait and you radiate strength. Awesome Etheree! Hugs Kelly Deschler October 14, 2015 at 2:44 PM Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly, Cecilia. I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem... Hugs :)

Carrie Richards October 4, 2015 at 5:15 PM Love this.........!! (like the earth .....will catch you!) :) Kelly Deschler October 14, 2015 at 2:41 PM Thank you once again for your nice comments, Carrie :)

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2015 at 1:42 PM Hey, Kelly, thanks for reading my poetry recently. I will check quickly to see if you have any recent ones I have not seen yet, but I don't think so. Have a lovely day. I am!! Kelly Deschler October 13, 2015 at 7:52 PM I'm glad to hear that, Andrea. It's been a good day for me, too... Thank you for taking the time to read my poems :)

Constance La France October 4, 2015 at 1:40 PM Kelly, congratulations on your win with this beauty and I also want to thank you so much for my awesome placement in your Pirate contest, I am so honored... Kelly Deschler October 13, 2015 at 7:50 PM You're very welcome. Thank you for taking part in my contest and for your kind comments :)

Cherl Dunn October 4, 2015 at 11:39 AM Dear Kelly Congrats on your winning poem here my souper friend, bravo it's so light and sweet simply a pleasure to read, it's totally a refreshing completely marvelous, and thanks for your review on my halloween poems, I enjoy doing this for this one of my favorite seasons of the year, Halloween rocks in my book, cheri Kelly Deschler October 13, 2015 at 7:39 PM Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly, Cheri. I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem, my friend... As you know the Halloween season is one of my favorite times of the year, as well :)

Sara Kendrick October 3, 2015 at 6:28 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Etherees are delightful..Sara Kelly Deschler October 9, 2015 at 11:00 PM Thank you for your kind congrats and comments, Sara. I appreciate it!... This was my first time writing an etheree and I really enjoyed the challenge :)

Sara Kendrick October 3, 2015 at 6:27 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Etherees are delightful..Sara

Tim Ryerson October 3, 2015 at 3:31 PM One of the best poems from one of the best poets...Can't help but wonder who this lucky individual is or do I mis- interpret? Lines five and six along with the last two knocked my socks off... Kelly Deschler October 9, 2015 at 10:44 PM You got it right, Tim. This poem was written about someone special, but who he is, is our secret :) I really appreciate your kind comments. Thank you so much, Tim!

Skat A October 2, 2015 at 10:39 PM Kelly, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT Kelly Deschler October 8, 2015 at 11:21 PM Thank you so much, Skat. I appreciate your kind congrats and comments :)

Arthur Vaso October 1, 2015 at 11:45 PM Wow, that is just so beautiful! :) Kelly Deschler October 8, 2015 at 11:04 PM Thank you so much, Arthur. I really appreciate your comments :)

Joseph May October 1, 2015 at 8:26 AM Lovely write Kelly... Congrats on your win Kelly Deschler October 7, 2015 at 11:58 PM Thank you so much, Joseph :)

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2015 at 2:26 AM I just love the "message" in your poem, Kelly! Congrats in my contest. Kelly Deschler October 6, 2015 at 10:52 PM Thank you, Andrea. I enjoyed your contest and the challenge of writing an etheree. It was my first time trying this form :)

Robert Lindley September 29, 2015 at 9:32 PM JOY IN THE CATCHING IT WOULD SEEM MY FRIEND. Enjoyed reading this fine poem.. A7 Kelly Deschler October 6, 2015 at 10:25 PM So glad you did, my friend. Thank you for the nice comments :)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2015 at 12:35 PM - Beautiful poem, Kelly ..... love the end! - Every time I read a Etheree poem, I will like to try one ..... soon ..... soooon .... but not today :))) - Luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kelly Deschler October 3, 2015 at 11:59 PM I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem, Anne-Lise... This was my first time writing an etheree. It was challenging, but I think it turned out well. I hope you will give the form a try soon!... Hugs :)

Ravi Sathasivam September 29, 2015 at 8:54 AM Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. All the best for the contest. Kelly Deschler October 3, 2015 at 11:29 PM I appreciate your nice comments and good luck wishes... Glad you enjoyed this poem, Ravi :)

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