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A Caterpillar Dreams

A soft mist clings to the horizon A lazy sun bleeding through it Seeping into the fading darkness A yellow-orange streak darts Across the silence of the pond Shouting to the feathered choir A Sunflower yawns Tipping its head slightly Wiggling its roots A weary Muskrat sighs Too late comes the dawn Too soon the sunset A rose petal falls Rippling the pond A caterpillar dreams of wings

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Date: 10/3/2023 8:56:00 AM
This was a lovely poem. The descriptions were fabulous.
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Date: 10/1/2023 7:55:00 PM
Nice nature scene, John. Soothing...
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Date: 10/1/2023 9:48:00 AM
This is such a wonderful poem my friend. The personification of nature, where caterpillars dream of wings.
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Date: 9/30/2023 2:02:00 PM
just a lovely personification--kind of soft as you used aspects of nature. I especially like 'a sunflower yawns...wiggling its roots.' Very creative. Enjoy your weekend, Sara
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Date: 9/30/2023 9:52:00 AM
Love how atmospheric this is John - the power to sweep away in a micro second
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Date: 9/30/2023 8:28:00 AM
This is so beautiful. Love it!
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