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A Cascade Of Love

“Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces” By John Ruskin 1853 All the tiny pieces of life blended together... When I met you at the amber sunset,  The gossamer light of the melting rays,  Fell on us ...beside the dock, with weathered grey planks,  I remembered everything what we lost!  The fragments, which I was never able to piece together,  The puzzles which would always stay mysterious,  You looked at me. In the shimmering  light,  Our eyes met, in the cascade of love. The world stood still, not a word Around us, all hushed.  I remembered the soothing raindrops which drizzled us I remembered the azure floating clouds,  Remembered the sprawled flower-petals with golden hues,  I remembered all - All that matters in the twilight  zone!    August 27, 2020 First Place For All the little Pieces Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 9/25/2020 11:03:00 AM
So many beautiful, visceral and vibrant images, Mala - "soothing raindrops," "melting rays," and puzzles that would stay mysterious. This reminds me of the song from GiGi - "Ah yes, I remember it well." So enjoyed this poem.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/25/2020 5:02:00 PM
Thank you, Sam. Delighted to know you liked the poem. This is my favourite too! I have to listen to the song you have mentioned - your comments are so inspiring! Love, Mala
Date: 9/10/2020 3:25:00 AM
Wow Malabika.....such a lovely write,take care and congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/10/2020 3:24:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Carol, for those encouraging words. Love, Mala
Date: 9/10/2020 2:38:00 AM
Malabika, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this excellent write _Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/10/2020 3:23:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Poet and Dear Sponsor. Your theme touched me - the poem came naturally. It's an honour to be placed with the brilliant poets. Best wishes, Mala
Date: 9/4/2020 10:24:00 PM
Congratulations dear friend for your TOP Win with this enchanting creation. This poem will be remembered . A FAVE..
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Date: 9/4/2020 4:19:00 AM
- Written with experience and the lines are beautiful ... excellent poems, Malabika :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/4/2020 5:17:00 AM
Thank you , Anne-Lise. Your valuable comments mean a lot. Wish you a wonderful weekend, too! Love, Mala
Date: 9/3/2020 9:01:00 PM
Congrats Malabika to win First place.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/4/2020 1:58:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha. Looking forward to reading yours! Love, Mala