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A Carpenter On Golgothe

There's nothing more I can do, he said as the blood flowed. What hurts the most is being abandoned, he whispered as I took the hammer. this task is not the best, you know how it is... sometimes you just do what you gotta do, a father does everything for his children and children need bread. Soon everything will pass, he said screaming with the pain of the blows black eyes fixed on me before passing out. his hair drips red sweat, sinful clouds roll across the sky, far away the oboes echo as if asking why. how many hits are needed for the flesh to be pierced, the work finally finished and I be eternally cursed?

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Date: 3/1/2022 10:54:00 PM
Sometimes things are just what they need to be. Pain can be a blessing when it is an acknowledgement of the error of our ways. Deep feeling and emotions were brought to my soul through your poetry today, Marco. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Marco Chies
Date: 3/2/2022 3:27:00 AM
Thank you Bill!!! The perspective of this poem is that of the one in charge of crucifying the Man, a job that must have been very complicated...

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