A Brief History of the Snake

   The snake sidles up to Eve
     from God she soon seeks reprieve

   With us yet, it slithers into Halls of Power
     injects venom ~ brave leaders cower
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Proxenos Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 2:28 AM
Very belated wishes for POTD for this short powerful poem Gershon, with its meaningful content. I might be late in commenting my friend nut I never forget. Blessings Jennifer.
Elliott Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 9:33 AM
Belated Congratulations on a much deserved POTD, Gershon, special poetry good wishes to you. Shalom my friend!
Baker Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 7:05 AM
Belated congratulations on your POTD, Gershon! I'm sure you enjoyed a bit of recognition for your poetic offerings. Have a great week, my friend. Bill
M  Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 5:51 AM
So happy to see your name and poem up here BB!! Belated POTD Congratulations my friend! Debx
Buehler Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 9:24 PM
Cleverly written couplets, Gershon! Delighted congratulations on your POTD. :)
Wraith Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 4:17 PM
Congratulations Gershon on POTD!! Your concise, captivating tale summarizes our current political and social climate!! Well Done
Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 8:06 PM
Well, thank you, Edward!
Eslinger Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 4:02 PM
Gershon! Congratulations on POTD! Your always excellent poetry really provokes thoght for me in your wise & truth exposing lines. Amazing insight & IMHO a warning.
Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 7:56 PM
Hey, thanks Sally. Glad I'm such a 'provocateur.' (My wife would laugh at that characterization, I'm sure!) ~ Gershon
Bowring Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 2:55 PM
Many congratulations Gershon with POTD. Brilliantly written couplets that says so much. Well done! :):)
Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 7:57 PM
Thanks for the enthusiasm for this short one, Christina. ~ Packing a Punch, gw
Goldsmith Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. The snake started with Eve but now is everywhere one looks. Watch out/be careful... Have a very blessed day................
Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 7:58 PM
Smart snake. Knew if he got to Eve, 'the mother of all life,' as described in Genesis, he'd succeed in poisoning all of us...
Gorelick Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 10:09 AM
There is no antitoxin for that bite. We elect the leaders we deserve. Congratulations on your POTD Gershon! Your sentiments rattle me, Robert
Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 7:58 PM
OK, Robert! I got what I asped for.
Parker Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 9:21 AM
Contemporary Fall, again! POTD to be sure. :o)
Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 7:58 PM
Fall precedes winter, as well...
Anaya Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on your POTD GW! I hope they'll choose wisely and not end our democracy and remember not to elect a leader if you know he is a snake. Not here in our warm community, don't let our political differences separate us, we are better than that ~Nicesssss ;) laughing derisively
Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 7:59 PM
Who is a snake? He who calls another a snake... Labels kill dialogue and understanding... Two Ears, only one Mouth, gw
Fowler Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 6:51 AM
Rightly put gw. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! laf :)
Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 8:01 PM
Rightly or wrongly, it's put. (Whatever the 'H' that means! lol.)
Jones Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 5:28 AM
Well done Gershon! Congrats on potd!
Turner Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 5:22 AM
Kudos Gershon on POTD. Ive known a few snakes. Their bite was harmless but the venom they spewed was toxic.
Rodgers Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 4:23 AM
Hello Gershon, Congratulations on POTD, and yes, as sin has entered the world to be with us until the end of time. Blessings, Daniel
Trestrail Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 4:06 AM
Yep, so true. And Lord knows we have a horse’s asp in the White House. Congrats on POTD.
Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 7:54 PM
'a horse's asp' in the White House! Hahahaha. Perfect, Keith. Keep 'em coming... and what say you about 'Word Salad Lady,' aka the 'VP?' (Following in Biden's shoes, eh?). Thanks for keeping a smile on my face. ~ gw
Seeker Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 3:53 AM
Powerfully penned, gw ~ warmest congratulations on POTD
Kaufman Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 3:15 AM
Congratulations Gershon on this very powerful and poignant penning well worthy of POTD recognition..
Kitchin Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 3:02 AM
Gershon, congratulations on POTD.
Cunningham Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 2:54 AM
Well said Gershon, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Willason Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 2:48 AM
Great treatment of a familiar symbol....worthy recipient of POTD award Gershon. You squeeze so much into so few words...well done.
Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 8:02 PM
Squeezing the blood from a turnip is my specialty... Fun-raiser
Greenhough Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 1:26 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Poem is cute.
Edmonds  Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 12:57 AM
One must be alert of snakes in church Gershon. Congratulations on receiving the honour for poem of the day… Beryl
Woods Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 9:41 PM
Sad but true. That old serpent, that dragon... will one day be nothing but ashes. Ezekiel ch.28:18! Beautifully done couplet GW!
Wolf Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 8:03 PM
Oh, very good. So true. And the Evil Inclination will be a long, limp string, 'spaghetti-like.'
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