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A Brief History of the Snake

The snake sidles up to Eve from God she soon seeks reprieve With us yet, it slithers into Halls of Power injects venom ~ brave leaders cower

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Date: 6/9/2024 2:28:00 AM
Very belated wishes for POTD for this short powerful poem Gershon, with its meaningful content. I might be late in commenting my friend nut I never forget. Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 5/30/2024 9:33:00 AM
Belated Congratulations on a much deserved POTD, Gershon, special poetry good wishes to you. Shalom my friend!
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Date: 5/29/2024 7:05:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your POTD, Gershon! I'm sure you enjoyed a bit of recognition for your poetic offerings. Have a great week, my friend. Bill
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Date: 5/29/2024 5:51:00 AM
So happy to see your name and poem up here BB!! Belated POTD Congratulations my friend! Debx
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Date: 5/28/2024 9:24:00 PM
Cleverly written couplets, Gershon! Delighted congratulations on your POTD. :)
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Date: 5/28/2024 8:30:00 PM
a piece with bite - my kind of write, well said, gershon
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Date: 5/28/2024 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations Gershon on POTD!! Your concise, captivating tale summarizes our current political and social climate!! Well Done
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2024 8:06:00 PM
Well, thank you, Edward!
Date: 5/28/2024 4:02:00 PM
Gershon! Congratulations on POTD! Your always excellent poetry really provokes thoght for me in your wise & truth exposing lines. Amazing insight & IMHO a warning.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2024 7:56:00 PM
Hey, thanks Sally. Glad I'm such a 'provocateur.' (My wife would laugh at that characterization, I'm sure!) ~ Gershon
Date: 5/28/2024 2:55:00 PM
Many congratulations Gershon with POTD. Brilliantly written couplets that says so much. Well done! :):)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2024 7:57:00 PM
Thanks for the enthusiasm for this short one, Christina. ~ Packing a Punch, gw
Date: 5/28/2024 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. The snake started with Eve but now is everywhere one looks. Watch out/be careful... Have a very blessed day................
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2024 7:58:00 PM
Smart snake. Knew if he got to Eve, 'the mother of all life,' as described in Genesis, he'd succeed in poisoning all of us...
Date: 5/28/2024 10:09:00 AM
There is no antitoxin for that bite. We elect the leaders we deserve. Congratulations on your POTD Gershon! Your sentiments rattle me, Robert
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2024 7:58:00 PM
OK, Robert! I got what I asped for.
Date: 5/28/2024 9:21:00 AM
Contemporary Fall, again! POTD to be sure. :o)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2024 7:58:00 PM
Fall precedes winter, as well...
Date: 5/28/2024 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD GW! I hope they'll choose wisely and not end our democracy and remember not to elect a leader if you know he is a snake. Not here in our warm community, don't let our political differences separate us, we are better than that ~Nicesssss ;) laughing derisively
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2024 7:59:00 PM
Who is a snake? He who calls another a snake... Labels kill dialogue and understanding... Two Ears, only one Mouth, gw
Date: 5/28/2024 7:50:00 AM
Applause! Delighted to see this poem was selected as POTD. Hearty congratulations!
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Date: 5/28/2024 6:51:00 AM
Rightly put gw. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! laf :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2024 8:01:00 PM
Rightly or wrongly, it's put. (Whatever the 'H' that means! lol.)
Date: 5/28/2024 5:28:00 AM
Well done Gershon! Congrats on potd!
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Date: 5/28/2024 5:22:00 AM
Kudos Gershon on POTD. Ive known a few snakes. Their bite was harmless but the venom they spewed was toxic.
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Date: 5/28/2024 4:23:00 AM
Hello Gershon, Congratulations on POTD, and yes, as sin has entered the world to be with us until the end of time. Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/28/2024 4:06:00 AM
Yep, so true. And Lord knows we have a horse’s asp in the White House. Congrats on POTD.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2024 7:54:00 PM
'a horse's asp' in the White House! Hahahaha. Perfect, Keith. Keep 'em coming... and what say you about 'Word Salad Lady,' aka the 'VP?' (Following in Biden's shoes, eh?). Thanks for keeping a smile on my face. ~ gw
Date: 5/28/2024 3:53:00 AM
Powerfully penned, gw ~ warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 5/28/2024 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations Gershon on this very powerful and poignant penning well worthy of POTD recognition..
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Date: 5/28/2024 3:02:00 AM
Gershon, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 5/28/2024 2:54:00 AM
Well said Gershon, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 5/28/2024 2:48:00 AM
Great treatment of a familiar symbol....worthy recipient of POTD award Gershon. You squeeze so much into so few words...well done.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/28/2024 8:02:00 PM
Squeezing the blood from a turnip is my specialty... Fun-raiser
Date: 5/28/2024 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Poem is cute.
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