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A Blessing

Father, my heart does ache for us Ripped out of my life, by evil snatchers With a knife in someone’s hand I heard you didn’t stay in the house Where my bedroom was with crib and toys Where you taught me how to write Where I rode the red tricycle and played Where I met my very best friend nearby As she was taken from me tragically The house stayed standing just as it was You left it there, when you passed away Now, it is there years later, falling down Fallen memories just like all of ours Filled with holes, like those left behind So deep, so dark, to almost be lost in The words I never got to speak haunt me But, I have seen belongings you left behind The bible, the cards, the photos, the poetry Poetry written by my uncle, even the rocks The very things that remain in my life now You will never be let go, within my heart Your presence in my early years, a blessing Heidi Sands 8/20/17

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Date: 8/20/2017 4:40:00 PM
This is very good with superb imagery and it grabs you from the start and never lets go. The story is so realistically described one can feel each moment unfold from your heart to the page. Well written my friend, Emile.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/20/2017 4:46:00 PM
Emile, thank you for making my day special with your kind feedback in this comment. I appreciate it very much! :)
Date: 8/20/2017 9:39:00 AM
Every day I see a little bit more of you...Don't know what say...except that I'm happy you're here today...Thanks for sharing
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/20/2017 9:51:00 AM
Yes, I suppose a little more is each day Arturo. Most of it is written years ago in poetry I have not even submitted here. These are all new. Thank you for being kind to me and I am happy you like what I share. You are welcome :) Have a nice day!
Date: 8/20/2017 9:33:00 AM
Heidi, such a sadly beautiful write, excellent
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/20/2017 9:50:00 AM
Broken wings, thank you so much for your comment. It means a lot to me on this one :)
Date: 8/20/2017 9:23:00 AM
This is such a sad poem, but so emotionally charged and well written! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! You have written a spectacularly painful piece, but with hope of good memories at the end! What a stunning poem, Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/20/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Russell. It kind of just flowed right out of me today. But, it means so much to me to receive your comment on this one ! I appreciate it! :)

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