A Blessing

Father, my heart does ache for us
Ripped out of my life, by evil snatchers
With a knife in someone’s hand
I heard you didn’t stay in the house
Where my bedroom was with crib and toys
Where you taught me how to write
Where I rode the red tricycle and played
Where I met my very best friend nearby
As she was taken from me tragically 
The house stayed standing just as it was
You left it there, when you passed away
Now, it is there years later, falling down
Fallen memories just like all of ours
Filled with holes, like those left behind
So deep, so dark, to almost be lost in
The words I never got to speak haunt me 
But, I have seen belongings you left behind
The bible, the cards, the photos, the poetry
Poetry written by my uncle, even the rocks
The very things that remain in my life now
You will never be let go, within my heart
Your presence in my early years, a blessing

Heidi Sands
8/20/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pinet Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 4:40 PM
This is very good with superb imagery and it grabs you from the start and never lets go. The story is so realistically described one can feel each moment unfold from your heart to the page. Well written my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 4:46 PM
Emile, thank you for making my day special with your kind feedback in this comment. I appreciate it very much! :)
Michael Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:39 AM
Every day I see a little bit more of you...Don't know what say...except that I'm happy you're here today...Thanks for sharing
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:51 AM
Yes, I suppose a little more is each day Arturo. Most of it is written years ago in poetry I have not even submitted here. These are all new. Thank you for being kind to me and I am happy you like what I share. You are welcome :) Have a nice day!
La France Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:33 AM
Heidi, such a sadly beautiful write, excellent
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:50 AM
Broken wings, thank you so much for your comment. It means a lot to me on this one :)
Sivey Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:23 AM
This is such a sad poem, but so emotionally charged and well written! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! You have written a spectacularly painful piece, but with hope of good memories at the end! What a stunning poem, Great Work!!
Sands Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Thank you so much Russell. It kind of just flowed right out of me today. But, it means so much to me to receive your comment on this one ! I appreciate it! :)
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