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I can bake a cherry pie, That men have said is for to die. Apple, berry, banana cream, Makes no difference, for all they scream. I have seen a strong man cry When I told him there was no more pie. Proposals I’ve had by the score. They’d marry me to get some more. Luscious flavor, tender crust, At church meals my pie’s a must. For other cooks it doom and gloom When they must take their pie back home. A mouthful of heaven in every bite, Roll it gently, get it right. My biggest fear is when I die. The tears shed will be for my pie. This shamefuly bragging poem is for the contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/17/2012 10:47:00 AM
clever and entertaining. i'll bet there's some truth in it, too!(not the last line, though)
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Date: 2/16/2012 9:37:00 PM
congrats Joyce on an excellent first place win luv.. an awesome composition...
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Date: 2/16/2012 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/15/2012 10:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Joyce! Every time I read it, I get hungry. Still waiting for some key lime (my fave). Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/15/2012 4:17:00 PM
Joyce, I love cherry pie (I will stop at that point). Very descriptive and full of double entendre's. I love it. Congrats on winning 1st place in Susan's contest.................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/15/2012 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Joyce. Have you ever baked a mulberry pie?
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Date: 2/15/2012 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Susan Burch's "Ridiculous Self Exaggerations" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2012 10:38:00 AM
I thik the tears would be for you dear Joyce congratulations xx
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Date: 2/15/2012 9:01:00 AM
Love it....and sure would love a piece of that pie!!! Congratulations to a wonderful poet and a wonderful pastry chef!!
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Date: 2/15/2012 8:26:00 AM
Very nice Joyce ,Congratulations on your win.Enjoyed the humour.
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Date: 2/12/2012 9:31:00 AM
I enjoyed your piece of "pie" poem this morning. How I wish I would be your neighbor so I can bug you a pie on every occasion. Thanks for commenting on my poem. Love Dalila
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Date: 2/12/2012 8:30:00 AM
Mmmmmm.....can I try the pie.....lovely poem of a lovely laydy! - love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/11/2012 11:31:00 PM
Is this for the self exaggeration contest? If so, I think you have a winner here. If not, I have to try some of your pie! LOL
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