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Wintry days were turning mild. After the harsh stormy days. Still not a sound could be heard Except the hammering of posts As I prepared the bird feeders. Surely it was time for their return. Yet not a sound could I detect that evening. So I filled the feeders with delicious seed And went for my usual long night sleep. But with dawn I was wide awake For then the garden began to fill with song. Two male scarlet tanagers settled on an oak On the other side of the street. I was thrilled even though Their song sounded a bit hoarse. Bluebirds sang a lively tune As they fed on worms. But what pleased me most Was to see two meadowlarks, The male feeding the female As she sat on an old nest. This spring was full of promise. A bird’s paradise. 20 February 2021 Spring Birds Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France POTD Placed 1

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Date: 3/26/2021 9:28:00 PM
What a beautiful poem! Birds are very verse-inspiring aren’t they? I also like “To be a Bird”. In fact I liked all your poems that came in my email inbox today. You are a very versatile poet. Congratulations on your Lifetime Membership.
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Date: 3/26/2021 5:11:00 AM
Hello Victor, I want to tell you how wonderful this poem is. As i read this poem, I felt like I was there listening to the birds songs. Victor my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 3/25/2021 3:13:00 PM
Victor what an absolutely breathtaking poem. Your imagery, cinematic!!! Congratulations! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 3/10/2021 10:41:00 AM
Beautiful poem Victor!!
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Date: 3/4/2021 2:10:00 AM
Congrats Victor on winning with this charming poem of spring and hope. Rock on.
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Date: 2/28/2021 11:38:00 AM
- Congratulations, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/28/2021 10:50:00 AM
How special it must have been to see one meadowlark feeding the other in the nest. Nicely done, Victor. Congrats on your POTD and your win in the contest! Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 2/28/2021 8:16:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my Spring Birds Challenge with this lovely poem, I like it a lot and your image is wonderful, well done _Constance
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Date: 2/28/2021 1:21:00 AM
Many congratulations dear Victor on your POTD with this beautiful poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/24/2021 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/21/2021 8:24:00 PM
"The garden began to fill with song" Which means Spring is in the air. :) This is so beautiful and uplifting. You paint such vivid images with your words. My heart is smiling. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 2/21/2021 7:24:00 PM
Victor, A wonderful entry for Constance' contest. A bird's paradise in lovely song of Spring. "Alouette, gentille alouette, Alouette, je te plumerai." -Richard
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Date: 2/21/2021 5:43:00 PM
WoW! Victor, This is a lovely entry for the contest. Good content and imagery. Best wishes in the in contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/21/2021 4:07:00 PM
Truly beautiful, Vic, and congratulations on potd...
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Date: 2/21/2021 3:38:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on POTD, a beautiful bird poem!
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Date: 2/21/2021 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend, you wrote a poem as if you were in the middle of a beautiful field of nature - Congratulations Victor for POTD, truly deserved. Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/21/2021 9:38:00 AM
What a lovely and tender picture of love even among birds, Victor! Congratulations on your POTD with this gentle picture of "spring" "promise." We love watching the birds return in spring - all gathered around our feeder. All the best.
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Date: 2/21/2021 9:37:00 AM
I loved the hope and joy of nature in this beautiful poem Victor. Congratulations on your well deserved honor of receiving POTD my friend! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/21/2021 9:28:00 AM
This is too good and perfect for the contest. A poem full of hope and promise of spring. Well deserved POTD Victor. Congrats and God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 2/21/2021 9:09:00 AM
Back with big congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/21/2021 9:07:00 AM
You're completely in the poem...Nice imagery...Congratulations Victor Buhagiar. on POTD
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Date: 2/21/2021 8:41:00 AM
Lovely piece, embracing the “a bird’s paradise”. I can hear the music, and see the meadow larks. Kudos.
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Date: 2/21/2021 8:09:00 AM
I do love the birds and the male bird feeding his mate was so sweet. Love it. Another fave for me. Congrats on POTD. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/21/2021 7:50:00 AM
Beautiful! Congrats on POTD
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Date: 2/21/2021 7:48:00 AM
Can I 'worm my way in here' to congratulate you on POTD, Victor?! Way to go! ~ Bird of Paradise
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