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A Big One She Craved

A tropical fruit is nutritious Bananas are mighty delicious A big one she craved So she misbehaved How many she had is auspicious

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2023 8:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A creative Limerick write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/6/2023 11:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Paula xxoo

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2023 6:50:00 AM

LOL Mike. Was her misbehavior typically at night? Congratulations! :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/6/2023 11:19:00 AM

Thank you Linda ( PS anytime of day is good, right?)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/3/2023 4:53:00 PM

Mike, a funny and bawdy one, congratulations on your winning placement!

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/4/2023 3:49:00 AM

Thank you so much Tania, I’m so glad you liked it! It was a fun contest xxoo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2023 11:56:00 AM

I like this one with the use of ious words. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/28/2023 2:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Sara xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/25/2023 3:36:00 PM

Mike: Naughty, naughty!! lol!! Good one. ~ Mellow Yellow

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/26/2023 6:13:00 AM

Thank you MY!!

Valsa George

Date: 8/25/2023 6:48:00 AM

Mike, I am sure you simply refer to the tropical fruit banana. A big one has more edibile flesh inside.....! :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2023 10:03:00 AM

Why of course I say Valsa with a wink!!!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/25/2023 6:27:00 AM

Hmmm . . . Now why is it I suspect you're alluding to something besides bananas?! Good one, Mike! Janice

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2023 10:03:00 AM

Now, now, I'll not kiss and tell, thanks Janice xxoo

Warren Doll

Date: 8/25/2023 5:09:00 AM

Mike, so clever. Made me lol. Thanks~ Warren.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2023 5:16:00 AM

I'm so glad, thank you Warren!! Happy Friday!

The Situation

Date: 8/24/2023 11:08:00 AM

Cute and I'm tempted to say naughty.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2023 4:40:00 AM

"Naughty" is in the eyes of the reader, lol!!! Thank you TS!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/24/2023 10:14:00 AM

ooh la la Mike i see you are feeling a littler fruity lol this is soooo hilarious and made me lol! hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2023 4:41:00 AM

A little fruit never hurt anyone !!!! Happy Friday lovely one xxoo

Lin Lane

Date: 8/24/2023 7:04:00 AM

This is so out of character from your usual romantic writes, Mike. That makes it all the more appreciated. I suppose it COULD be considered romantic. LOL You can write whatever you choose and it will be composed with great rhyme and reason.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2023 4:39:00 AM

Thank you Lin, I always appreciate the kind words that you share with me xxoo