A beautiful mirror

-Escape of the mountain-

Do you care about my breast?
The new curve - countryside corset. 
The beauty of every summer dress 
Laying down, wearing out gravity 
Embracing the same feeling; Your
hands indulged in. Passion and devotion, 
around perfumed scenery... 
     The perfect pair

Today we will pray,
Counting every second on the clock 
No longer the womanly figure before'
I will possess a new battle, 
around the virtues of my palace.

-Will you still be there, 
  when the hump and lump are gone?
-Will I still be the queen of your heart?
Patiently I shall wait and see, 
 in hopes to gain the time, breast cancer stole 
Leaving behind torn tissue, with a daily reminder of;
The one that got away.

---note---
A Focus on Breast Cancer 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/25/2017 7:46:00 PM
Just thinking of you and came here to say hello. I hope all is well! ( I just fell on this one when I came here, how interesting I came to one on breast cancer!) I forgot you wrote this one. It's very emotive and heartfelt.
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Date: 6/8/2017 1:33:00 AM
Hey you.when you get a chantz.. ..inside joke on..Chantz... ...plz contact me ..have some goofyness on writing so m ed thing...hope this fines you we ll
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Date: 4/23/2017 8:15:00 AM
So beautifully expressed in relation to cancer warriors. They are more beautiful because they fight the disease with bravery and a smile on their face. Loved it :)
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Date: 3/1/2017 2:30:00 PM
Yes, I have known a few ladies, Nice write :)
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Date: 1/17/2017 10:22:00 AM
I hope your ex-mother-in-law is having a happy life now. There are special bras she can wear. I have seen them in the bra department. I have enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 12/20/2016 12:25:00 PM
Though a male, I can sympathize with women who have breast cancer. Thank you for reading me today. Best to you. / M
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Date: 12/12/2016 4:41:00 AM
Very endearing and honest poem, PD. Such a relevant issue in regards to the strains it puts on a relationship. It tests the bonds that keep two people together. Is it more than just skin deep, our love for each other. The questions posed in this poem alone is gold worthy. Love and joy to you and yours.
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Date: 10/7/2016 8:27:00 PM
Awsome poetry that is all I can say.
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Date: 10/5/2016 7:10:00 PM
Sincerely awed, I can't begin to articulate how affecting this was. No words...
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Date: 9/19/2016 7:47:00 PM
Nicely done Linda I hope you are fine.
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Date: 8/18/2016 12:27:00 PM
Very sensitive poem...Thank you for your comment on my poem I posted. You have written so many poems. It will take me a long time to read them all. I liked this poem. I am 15 years cancer free. :)
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Date: 8/6/2016 6:30:00 PM
A lot of emotion in this power packed piece. The internal wondering, the questions are so poignant while the strength of your words are of resilience and hope. A great support you are with great courage by your former mother-in-law. Thank you for sharing, I send many blessings to you both, lynn
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Date: 7/17/2016 10:24:00 AM
like this one Linda, great start and ending.
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Date: 7/12/2016 2:59:00 PM
L- It is tragic that ones palace may be despoiled beyond our control. It is miraculous that ones virtue may not. J
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Date: 7/2/2016 11:52:00 PM
Very moving, Linda. I especially like the lines ... "I will possess a new battle, around the virtues of my palace"
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Date: 7/2/2016 3:35:00 PM
I am always here Love Al
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Date: 7/2/2016 1:49:00 PM
Well written and poetry notes, Louis.
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Date: 6/28/2016 12:43:00 PM
This is very touching Linda..Breast cancer is taking toll on my small island too. Its sad...but I think at time the more important thing is to learn to accept things. Your m. in law is very courageous and you very supportive, I must say...great write, I'm sure she loved that! :D
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Date: 6/24/2016 9:52:00 AM
Powerful message.
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Date: 5/23/2016 9:47:00 PM
Very well written! Much here to think about, how one never knows what tomorrow will bring, and the necessity for deeper love if to have tender comfort during such trials. Profound read.
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Date: 5/22/2016 12:41:00 AM
Lovely one Linda , the words bring out both the pride and anguish of what breasts can bring and cancer can take away. Its so painful hearing nowadays so many close ones getting cancer the increase is alarmingly frightening to say the least.
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Date: 5/18/2016 4:53:00 PM
This is Amazing..mirror mirror on my wall let the curse of this be all. It's gone now and hopefully will not return. Because the lustful and steamy moments should never end!
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Date: 5/14/2016 11:34:00 AM
what an emotional poem! great job!! you're really a very good poet.
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Date: 5/9/2016 6:19:00 PM
Hi Destroyer A, What a wonderful poem. The doctor said 1 in 8 women will get this despicable disease. It has caught our family by surprise. I encourage all to get regular mammograms. It is never too early to start getting them. Your poem has captured many of the emotions that go along with breast cancer. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Best wishes, JP
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Date: 4/30/2016 9:49:00 PM
i really like that poem. A lot of emotions. Your really good.
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