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A Beautiful Day

A beautiful day A dark cloud, not angry, just an early morning formation, a soft pink hue on its fluffy underbelly, is just now waking up as it floats by I gaze past the light gray atmosphere of this new dawn to a place where the sun is already shining, where skies are blue and crystal clear And as my sun happily appears, I imagine your smile now glowing on this buttermilk horizon, illuminating every dark cloud to once again make this a beautiful day Good morning Soupers

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Lenna Walker

Date: 5/12/2017 12:02:00 PM

Good morning.. or I should say afternoon .... Your words often seem to create sweet visions and bring forth smiles. That cloud with the " soft pink hue on its fluffy underbelly" I could see it perfectly. Have an 'illuminating' day friend :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/12/2017 12:32:00 PM

Thank you Lenna. I have seen a few of those clouds lately, such a grand sky the sunrise can paint. I appreciate your kindness and your encouragement always my friend. I hope you have a beautiful day too.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/12/2017 11:37:00 AM

No, sorry. I think not. You your pen and keyboard need to compose more. (lol) -- smile --

Chris Green
Date: 5/12/2017 12:30:00 PM

Yes ma'am. :(

Tim Smith

Date: 5/12/2017 9:23:00 AM

Have a beautiful day

Chris Green
Date: 5/12/2017 11:04:00 AM

Thanks Tim, you too.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/12/2017 9:22:00 AM

Bonjour, your delightful sunrise description is such a great way to start the day. Thank you for these morning gifts of yours:) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 5/12/2017 11:04:00 AM

Good morning Anne Marie. Thank you for your gifts of beautiful comments you leave for me. I am so happy you stopped by and enjoyed this one.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/12/2017 9:18:00 AM

Remain seated oh poet of imagery and kaleidoscope. This is gentle and beautiful in every way. We readers are glad to see the gray passed and turned you to the sun and light to see all that you tell us. Always do you match morning and night wonderfully that define both with each of their essence. Enjoy the rest of the morning and have a wonderful weekend.

Chris Green
Date: 5/12/2017 11:03:00 AM

Thank you my friend for always shining your light on me with your beautiful and touching comments. I am so thrilled you enjoy my work and always look forward to your visits Lisa. Thank you so much again. (Ok, can I stand back up now?) : )