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A Barn Field With Memories

Barn’s beauty doth now seem out of place Holding but memories of someone’s page Lone relic image of the days gone by Of many tears, fears, trouble and toil Perhaps joys of many jamborees The echoes of the times would remember All the whole wide world be but a stage A personal enigma of life's phase A barn’s image of many days gone by Left but mysteries of life’s rehearsal The sacredness of human essence be gone Gone from mortal view, but not forgotten Held securely of Cosmic consciousness In the master field of sacred memory!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/13/2010 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win John in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2010 9:10:00 PM
Many congratulations Moses for yet another victory. God bless
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Date: 12/12/2010 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win in Rick's contest, John. The sacred memory of the barn should always be treasured by your heart and mind. Your emotional poem evokes the joys of a bygone era..." but not forgotten." Enjoy your reward with pride. Thanks for comments. Love and Peace, Andrew.
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Date: 12/11/2010 7:07:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest John with this great entry
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Date: 12/11/2010 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your placing with this nice effort. RAY
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Date: 12/11/2010 4:35:00 PM
VEry very good one, john. I much enjoyed this winning poem. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/11/2010 7:32:00 AM
Many congratulations John on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James
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Date: 12/11/2010 6:00:00 AM
Congrats Moses on your big win in Rick's contest with this elegant write and win my friend.. enjoy your top spot today with much luv..
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Date: 12/11/2010 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on this second place win the contest, John
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:19:00 PM
congrats John this is so good, deserved winner. Harry
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:16:00 PM
Big congrats on your second place in Rick's contest with the wonderful poem, John! Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/27/2010 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Thanks for letting me know that I won in your contest..I know that it must be hard to choose the winners from so many eloquent writes that are entered in these contest..Thanks again for your kind comments..Sara
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Date: 10/23/2010 10:32:00 AM
Yes, sowonderful to know there is no end just change of form! Light & Love
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Date: 10/20/2010 6:28:00 AM
John, haven't seen you post any new work lately. Hope all is well. Miss reading your words, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/19/2010 9:27:00 PM
This is very lovely. I wish you best in the contest, john. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/19/2010 4:54:00 PM
Really beautiful John...I enjoyed reading this and I wish you good luck in Rick's contest. Love, audrey
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:48:00 AM
My good wishes for your grand success. Love and best wishes..Ravindra ..J F
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:47:00 AM
What a beautiful writes my friend and what a lovely starting, 'Barn’s beauty doth now seem out of place, Holding but memories of someone’s page'. It's Gem of a Poem. Thank you so much for such a touching and moving Poem. It was a joy to read this lovely piece. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...John Freeman
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Date: 10/16/2010 1:12:00 PM
So many memories these barns hold John. I am wishing you all the best in the contest with this gem ;) Wilma
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Date: 10/16/2010 11:28:00 AM
Wish there ways to preserve these old barns as well as their memories. I do believe in the concept of a cosmic consciousness that records everything. Enjoyed your poem very much, John.
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Date: 10/16/2010 8:08:00 AM
wow my friend you really rocked on this one its like a storybook within self loved the imagery and play on words here also thanks dear one for your warm comments on my works as well keep that pen flowing hugs and blessings my friend
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Date: 10/16/2010 4:51:00 AM
cosmicly good!
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Date: 10/15/2010 6:09:00 PM
I just read your other red barn poem, John. These two are very similar and I like them both. This one may be a bit easier for some folks to follow, but I think the other has an edge. Thanks for sharing these with us, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/15/2010 12:21:00 PM
a clever write John, impressive walk'
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Date: 10/15/2010 5:52:00 AM
very very nice good luck in the contest going through some issues myself will things work out is always the question with no answer have a great wekkend and thanks for your comments faleshia
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