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Tenderness

Rushes to the window with every pitter-patter but it is only the rain crashing into me trying to wash away my pain reminding of sunny days where the pitter-patter was the beating of my heart where love was never sought but happily was found my heart breathes feeling once more your tenderness pitter-patters run across the oaken hardwood floors and I see in her your smile your love your heart The rain and my tears fall yet I know most go a lifetime without true love but no not me my heart goes pitter-patter one last time butterflies float away into my soul and I remember I loved you

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Date: 9/28/2016 7:18:00 PM
Oh---Tim this is alovely poem that you wrote.it is my favourite of your poems.This uis a smile on my face.Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 9/26/2016 12:48:00 PM
This one is definitely one of my favorites in the contest. Congrats on the placement and thank you for sharing. W
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Date: 9/25/2016 7:09:00 PM
very romantic Tim :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/25/2016 5:33:00 AM
Great write Tim, congrats on a great win.
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Date: 9/24/2016 9:43:00 PM
Cowboys Americas Team................. :):):) Tim, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. :):):) Stop by my latest blog "Last Laugh." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/20/2015 7:03:00 PM
a pleasure to read. SKAT
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:19:00 AM
one last time butterflies float away into my soul and I remember I love d you.... Such exceptional li nes,,, Tomy Fave : )
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Date: 12/18/2015 10:20:00 AM
Amazing and deep, thank you, Tim, for the wonderful heartfelt move. SKAT
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Date: 12/18/2015 7:15:00 AM
You the winner ,my friend, Tim for you have loved. A few tears is a good way to prepare one's heart to welcome a new love! Cheer up, your beautiful poetry written by your tender heart soon will celebrate!
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Date: 12/17/2015 9:30:00 PM
Beautiful. I think your last line should be in the present tense.....very heartfelt.
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Date: 12/17/2015 2:50:00 PM
Heartfelt Tim and sad. You know how to bring out the emotions in the reader my friend.
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Date: 12/17/2015 2:48:00 PM
- I'm so glad that this is not your tears, Tim - Touching written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/17/2015 2:30:00 PM
Oh Tim this is so far away from your usual romantic writes - beautiful yet such sad imagery:-( hugs Jan xx7
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