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January 23, 2024

A Valentine Limerick Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

SECOND PLACE

desperately in love a song she sings, for handsome valentine, rejoicing spring ! is he really aware, breathtaking passion so rare, how thrilled she is like a bird spreading wings !

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/22/2024 3:15:00 PM

a wonderful Valentine's Limerick and one worthy of your placement in the contest. I enjoyed your poem. Have a wonderful evening, Sara

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/28/2024 7:08:00 PM

Dear Sara, Thank you for reading my poem - so glad you enjoyed it! I am having a great time travelling in a warm place...experiencing sun, flowers, songs of birds...will be back soon. Love and best wishes to you, My Lovely Friend!

Bill Baker

Date: 2/19/2024 10:57:00 PM

Congratulations on the high finish in the contest, Mala. Well-deserved for this fine Valentines Limerick, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/28/2024 7:04:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Bill. I got up at midnight, and felt like writing a poem - short and sweet. I am sorry, Dear Bill - I am getting late in replying, because I am travelling. Best wishes, Dear Poet.

Valsa George

Date: 2/4/2024 8:31:00 PM

So beautiful. Hope he will respond to her serenade ! Congratulations Mala on your win!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/6/2024 5:47:00 AM

Dear Valsa, Thank you for your visit and inspiring comment. I enjoy writing limericks - and reading the funny ones.

Len Gasun

Date: 2/4/2024 6:39:00 PM

Beautiful and well-crafted limerick for Valentines my dear poet friend. I enjoyed this. Thank you so much for sharing and Congratulations on your win! Hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/6/2024 5:45:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Len. I enjoyed writing this limerick, Dear Friend. In few lines, this poetic form expresses a lot. Hugs ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2024 3:21:00 PM

very nice, Mala. Congrats

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/6/2024 5:44:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Can't wait to read yours, Dear Poet.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/4/2024 9:54:00 AM

Love the simile Mala. Very cute. Congratulations! :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/6/2024 5:43:00 AM

Dear Linda, Thank you so much for your visit and encouraging comment. Love ~

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/4/2024 8:52:00 AM

Mala, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet limerick!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/6/2024 5:42:00 AM

Thank you, Tania. I am honoured.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/4/2024 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Limerick write. Have a blessed day with your win..................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/4/2024 7:35:00 AM

Thank you so much, Dear Paula. Appreciate your lovely comment. Looking forward to reading yours!

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/29/2024 7:52:00 AM

Dear sweet Mala, this is such a lovely limerick. I love the title too. ‘ like a bird spreading wings’ is such a beautiful image of the heart soaring when in love. Such a joy to read. Thank you for sharing. I hope you are well and you are having a good time on your travels. Take care and big hugs to you.xx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/30/2024 3:33:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Christina - your comment is so appreciated! I am well, and travelling - having great experiences.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2024 2:52:00 AM

- Thank you for a smile, Mala ... wonderful and certainly a sweet song ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs ?

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/25/2024 3:00:00 AM

Sorry for not commenting enough…I am travelling, and organizing a Book-talk on February 12.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/25/2024 2:58:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! I wait for comments from my dearest friends…is there anything else more encouraging than that?! Lots of Hugs ~

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/23/2024 6:19:00 AM

a cute and clever Valentine's Limerick..made me smile...Hope you're well..thinking of you, hugs, Sara

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/23/2024 8:07:00 AM

Dear Sara, I sincerely apologize for not communicating for a while. I am travelling…in India right now. Really appreciate your inspiring comment! Thank you so much, Dearest Friend, for your support. Love and Hugs ~