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Spreading Wings

desperately in love a song she sings,
for handsome valentine, rejoicing spring !
is he really aware,
breathtaking passion so rare,
how thrilled she is like a bird spreading wings !

Copyright © Malabika Ray Choudhury | Year Posted 2024

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Bill Baker Date: 2/19/2024 10:57:00 PM Congratulations on the high finish in the contest, Mala. Well-deserved for this fine Valentines Limerick, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 2/28/2024 7:04:00 PM Thank you, Dear Bill. I got up at midnight, and felt like writing a poem - short and sweet. I am sorry, Dear Bill - I am getting late in replying, because I am travelling. Best wishes, Dear Poet.

Valsa George Date: 2/4/2024 8:31:00 PM So beautiful. Hope he will respond to her serenade ! Congratulations Mala on your win! Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 2/6/2024 5:47:00 AM Dear Valsa, Thank you for your visit and inspiring comment. I enjoy writing limericks - and reading the funny ones.

Len Gasun Date: 2/4/2024 6:39:00 PM Beautiful and well-crafted limerick for Valentines my dear poet friend. I enjoyed this. Thank you so much for sharing and Congratulations on your win! Hugs Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 2/6/2024 5:45:00 AM Thank you, Dear Len. I enjoyed writing this limerick, Dear Friend. In few lines, this poetic form expresses a lot. Hugs ~

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/4/2024 3:21:00 PM very nice, Mala. Congrats Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 2/6/2024 5:44:00 AM Thanks, Andrea. Can't wait to read yours, Dear Poet.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 2/4/2024 9:54:00 AM Love the simile Mala. Very cute. Congratulations! :) Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 2/6/2024 5:43:00 AM Dear Linda, Thank you so much for your visit and encouraging comment. Love ~

Tania Kitchin Date: 2/4/2024 8:52:00 AM Mala, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet limerick! Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 2/6/2024 5:42:00 AM Thank you, Tania. I am honoured.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/4/2024 7:04:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Limerick write. Have a blessed day with your win.................. Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 2/4/2024 7:35:00 AM Thank you so much, Dear Paula. Appreciate your lovely comment. Looking forward to reading yours!

Christina Bowring Date: 1/29/2024 7:52:00 AM Dear sweet Mala, this is such a lovely limerick. I love the title too. ‘ like a bird spreading wings’ is such a beautiful image of the heart soaring when in love. Such a joy to read. Thank you for sharing. I hope you are well and you are having a good time on your travels. Take care and big hugs to you.xx Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 1/30/2024 3:33:00 AM Thank you, Dear Christina - your comment is so appreciated! I am well, and travelling - having great experiences.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/25/2024 2:52:00 AM - Thank you for a smile, Mala ... wonderful and certainly a sweet song ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs ? Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 1/25/2024 3:00:00 AM Sorry for not commenting enough…I am travelling, and organizing a Book-talk on February 12. Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 1/25/2024 2:58:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise! I wait for comments from my dearest friends…is there anything else more encouraging than that?! Lots of Hugs ~