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One In Five Poetry Contest

Sponsor is Joseph May

6.18.25

We can’t change the world it's true~ we still have an unfettered opportunity to express our opinions, one way is in this collage —Poet #5

Sea trash begone, as youth shall surge with their passion and devotion Debris where land and water merge Sea trash begone! Breakthrough solutions in motion ending plastic pollution purge Serene is a blue-green ocean Unafraid to swim and submerge inheritors, high echelon Fallen baton cease and emerge Sea trash begone! #5

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2025 10:49:00 AM

Great message and take on that picture prompt!

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/19/2025 11:33:00 AM

I couldn't resist! TY ~ xhugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/19/2025 6:26:00 AM

Going to the beach used to be so beautiful and calming. So sad it has become such a dumping ground. What is wrong with us!!??!! Nicely writ my friend. :)

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/19/2025 11:35:00 AM

I agree, I am afraid of going in the water after the Palisade fires as well, toxic run-off! yucky. TY, Linda Alice~

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/18/2025 11:46:00 PM

Hi Anaya, the refrain is the first four syllables from the first line for a roundel I believe. Cool rhyme choices x

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/19/2025 11:31:00 AM

I also changed the title, then I removed like D said to and re-entered. Thanks for your help, Andrea!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/19/2025 10:50:00 AM

You can still remove it if it's been read, Anaya. Go to your contest list of poems and remove it there in case you have edited it now.

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/19/2025 12:32:00 AM

Yep, it's already been read, hmm. :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/19/2025 12:20:00 AM

Looks good to me, might be best removing and re-entering to contest just in case already moved to next round x

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/19/2025 12:07:00 AM

Screaming! Yeah that's not going to work. Tyvm appreciate it! Back to the drawing board~

Anne Winter

Date: 6/18/2025 7:14:00 PM

Dear Anaya, how beautiful our earth is! it's a pity that it's not taken care of properly. Your poem is brilliantly written. It's thought provoking. I'm glad I read it. Best, Anne

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/19/2025 12:18:00 AM

Anne, it was quite the task and still I hadn't figured out my mistake, well thanks to DD, it's now been fixed! That was very kind of her help, I'm grateful ~Ty!

Paige Hind

Date: 6/18/2025 5:39:00 PM

Yes, yes! Glad you wrote of this. It needs attention.

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/19/2025 12:19:00 AM

You are right, the earth needs our attention as well as my poem, hah!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/18/2025 1:31:00 PM

Love your write "Sea Glass Or Sea Trash." Great Picture and Quote... "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Great line, "Sea trash begone!" Yes, begone... Have a lovely day writing away......

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/18/2025 2:38:00 PM

I found the Roundel quite a difficult form for me, and in the end my poem is better for it. Tyvm, sweet poetess, xhugs