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Savour the Moments

“ Time is the thief you cannot banish”    Phyllis Mcginley, Writer 1905 - 1978 a major character in the drama of life!  slowly making its entry, when unawares, leaving the stage at a faster pace,  doesn't give much opportunity to applaud...  stop, please stop ..be kind .. we require your presence - so many dreams unfulfilled,  slow down, please ...be gentle, so many goals to accomplish. spent youth being wild and merry, drinking from the brimming cup of joy,  childhood and adolescence - endless pleasures and happiness,  the best and jubilant days don't return.  time spies on us ~ the clock ticks.  when we have slightest idea how every moment is passing by ~ engrossed with bits and pieces, fragments of life,  get stunned by sudden realization, barely knowing,how every minute, every hour is meandering away... noiseless, without an utterance ~ lose our grip, every second trickles down like grains of sand  through our fingers, nowhere to be found.  savour the moments - every moment is a blessing, enjoy life understanding the fragility fully well,  time is a thief who knows when to act, without making much of a fuss.  we want to exile him, but life has little meaning without this offender, who is swift and all-encompassing. November 11, 2020  First Place For Writing Challenge - Quote Inspired - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 11/16/2020 6:15:00 PM
Enjoyed reading, Malabika, the clock does ticks and leaves our past. Congratulations on your win in Constance contest. Hugs Eve
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/17/2020 9:08:00 AM
Thanks so much, Eve. Feel sad especially when I realize - the serene childhood days are not going to come back! Hugs ~ Mala
Date: 11/16/2020 12:50:00 PM
Mala, this just overflows with rich images - "time spies on us :l," "making its entrance when unawares," "time is a thief who knows when to act." Wonderful personification and I hear echoes of Shakespeare - "all the world's a stage." Wonderful hints of the thespian. Congratulations on your first place win my friend. Blessings!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/16/2020 2:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam. WOW! what a compliment! Echoes of the Great Master! Sam, your comments are like blessings for me in this poetic journey. Only I wish I could write like you! Love and hugs ~ Mala
Date: 11/16/2020 12:27:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winner. Yes, each moment is so precious. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/16/2020 2:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara. So delighted to know that you enjoyed this poem. Love ~ Mala
Date: 11/15/2020 5:47:00 PM
"So many dreams unfulfilled" captures why the passing of time is so difficult for us to accept. I love the wisdom and hope of 'savour the moments - every moment is a blessing, enjoy life'. Well said, my friend. Congratulations on your #1 win ~ John
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/16/2020 2:01:00 PM
Thank you, Dear John. I really look forward to your comments - after reading your inspiring comments, I feel - okay, sure, perhaps I wrote something worth looking at. Your comments are confidence-booster! Appreciate so much ~ Mala
Date: 11/15/2020 5:23:00 AM
A mindful masterpiece, congrats.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/15/2020 5:29:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. I feel humbled, appreciate your comment.
Date: 11/15/2020 2:04:00 AM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my Quote Inspired Contest with this excellent poem _Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/15/2020 5:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance. I am humbled and honoured. Love to participate in your contests.
Date: 11/15/2020 2:01:00 AM
Back with congratulations dear Mala on your 1st place win. Rereading this time and again to savour every word every line. Magnificently done!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/15/2020 5:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, JCB. It's an honour to be with talented poets like yourself. I have to read yours again and again. I am learning and growing. Love ~ Mala
Date: 11/11/2020 5:44:00 PM
Excellent piece! Yes, savour the moments before they slip away. There is so much truth conveyed in this evocative poem. Good luck for the win dear Mala.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/11/2020 6:08:00 PM
Thanks, Dear JCB. So glad you liked this poem. Love, Mala
Date: 11/11/2020 3:58:00 PM
“Time is a thief who knows when to act”- a brilliant metaphor.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/11/2020 6:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren. So glad you liked that metaphor!

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