Savour the Moments

“ Time is the thief you cannot banish”    Phyllis Mcginley, Writer 1905 - 1978

a major character in the drama of life! 
slowly making its entry, when unawares,
leaving the stage at a faster pace, 
doesn't give much opportunity to applaud... 

stop, please stop ..be kind ..
we require your presence - so many dreams unfulfilled, 
slow down, please ...be gentle,
so many goals to accomplish.

spent youth being wild and merry,
drinking from the brimming cup of joy, 
childhood and adolescence - endless pleasures and happiness, 
the best and jubilant days don't return. 

time spies on us ~ the clock ticks. 
when we have slightest idea how every moment is passing by ~
engrossed with bits and pieces, fragments of life, 
get stunned by sudden realization,
barely knowing,how every minute, every hour is meandering away...
noiseless, without an utterance ~
lose our grip, every second trickles down like grains of sand 
through our fingers, nowhere to be found. 

savour the moments - every moment is a blessing,
enjoy life understanding the fragility fully well, 
time is a thief who knows when to act,
without making much of a fuss. 
we want to exile him, but life has little meaning without this offender,
who is swift and all-encompassing. 


                                    November 11, 2020 
                                          First Place
          For Writing Challenge - Quote Inspired - Poetry Contest 
                              Sponsor: Constance La France
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Roper Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 6:15 PM
Enjoyed reading, Malabika, the clock does ticks and leaves our past. Congratulations on your win in Constance contest. Hugs Eve
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 9:08 AM
Thanks so much, Eve. Feel sad especially when I realize - the serene childhood days are not going to come back! Hugs ~ Mala
Kauffman Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 12:50 PM
Mala, this just overflows with rich images - "time spies on us :l," "making its entrance when unawares," "time is a thief who knows when to act." Wonderful personification and I hear echoes of Shakespeare - "all the world's a stage." Wonderful hints of the thespian. Congratulations on your first place win my friend. Blessings!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 2:05 PM
Thank you so much, Sam. WOW! what a compliment! Echoes of the Great Master! Sam, your comments are like blessings for me in this poetic journey. Only I wish I could write like you! Love and hugs ~ Mala
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Enjoyed reading your winner. Yes, each moment is so precious. Congrats on your winner. Sara
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 2:02 PM
Thank you so much, Sara. So delighted to know that you enjoyed this poem. Love ~ Mala
Watt Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 5:47 PM
"So many dreams unfulfilled" captures why the passing of time is so difficult for us to accept. I love the wisdom and hope of 'savour the moments - every moment is a blessing, enjoy life'. Well said, my friend. Congratulations on your #1 win ~ John
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November 16, 2020 at 2:01 PM
Thank you, Dear John. I really look forward to your comments - after reading your inspiring comments, I feel - okay, sure, perhaps I wrote something worth looking at. Your comments are confidence-booster! Appreciate so much ~ Mala
Lamoureux Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 5:23 AM
A mindful masterpiece, congrats.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 5:29 AM
Thank you, Richard. I feel humbled, appreciate your comment.
La France Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 2:04 AM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my Quote Inspired Contest with this excellent poem _Constance
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 5:28 AM
Thank you so much, Constance. I am humbled and honoured. Love to participate in your contests.
Brul Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 2:01 AM
Back with congratulations dear Mala on your 1st place win. Rereading this time and again to savour every word every line. Magnificently done!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 5:31 AM
Thank you so much, JCB. It's an honour to be with talented poets like yourself. I have to read yours again and again. I am learning and growing. Love ~ Mala
Brul Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 5:44 PM
Excellent piece! Yes, savour the moments before they slip away. There is so much truth conveyed in this evocative poem. Good luck for the win dear Mala.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 6:08 PM
Thanks, Dear JCB. So glad you liked this poem. Love, Mala
Krutsinger Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 3:58 PM
“Time is a thief who knows when to act”- a brilliant metaphor.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 6:06 PM
Thank you so much, Caren. So glad you liked that metaphor!
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