Luminosity:

Let love and light fill you, Light to guide you in dark, Love to fill your soul's, heart, Limit yourself never, Look always into light, Lutenists will play songs, Loudly within your mind. April~14~2017 (6 syllables per line)

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Mark Martin

Date: 4/27/2017 12:27:00 PM

Like the line "limit yourself never"! Congratulations ww! :-)

White Wolf
Date: 4/27/2017 5:24:00 PM

Thank you, Mark /|\

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/19/2017 10:09:00 PM

Thinking outside the box. I like the way you defined luminosity. Congrats on your win, White Wolf! Blessings, Kim

White Wolf
Date: 4/20/2017 2:05:00 AM

Thank you very much, Kim /|\

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/18/2017 4:04:00 PM

Congrats, WW!

White Wolf
Date: 4/18/2017 5:43:00 PM

And congrats to you too, Kim /|\

Chuck Melugin

Date: 4/18/2017 2:24:00 PM

Wolf, This beaming reflection shatters the darkness as it propels love at warp speed. 7 my best to you, chuck

White Wolf
Date: 4/18/2017 5:43:00 PM

Live long and prosper, Chuck /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2017 1:29:00 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf
Date: 4/18/2017 1:37:00 AM

Oh, that's so nice of you, thank you very much, Anne-Lise /|\

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/17/2017 5:38:00 PM

Hello White Wolf. Allow me to say Yes Yes and Yes. Light is always the way and a must. Luminosity indeed. Well done throughout. Honestly. Have a wonderful night or perhaps morning.

White Wolf
Date: 4/17/2017 6:12:00 PM

Yes, it is morning over here in the land of Oz! Thank you for your visit today! I'm in a rush this morning, so cheers! /|\

Morgen Farmer

Date: 4/15/2017 8:45:00 PM

Emotion runs deep in this poem. We all need some light to get us out of adversity. Well done wolf!

White Wolf
Date: 4/16/2017 5:15:00 PM

Great to see you again, Morgen /|\

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/14/2017 12:06:00 PM

Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words with great effect. Emile.

White Wolf
Date: 4/14/2017 6:44:00 PM

Thank you so much, Emile /|\

Chris Green

Date: 4/14/2017 8:55:00 AM

The perfect poetic path to follow. Nicely done my friend.

White Wolf
Date: 4/14/2017 6:43:00 PM

Thanks heaps, Chris /|\

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/14/2017 5:52:00 AM

Lovely and bright are flashes from fireflies and their dancing flights. Longingly I seek to again embrace such beautiful sights. Loudly my mind begs to go far back yet when I go I can not find my old tracks. Your poem brighten this old man's morn my friend.. Thank you.A7 and a fav..

White Wolf
Date: 4/14/2017 6:42:00 AM

Sigh, what wonderful words you write, Robert! Even your comments are poetic my friend! Have a marvelous weekend matey! /|\

Darren White

Date: 4/14/2017 2:52:00 AM

Loud and lovely, Budgie :)

White Wolf
Date: 4/14/2017 4:17:00 AM

Thank you, Duir /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/14/2017 1:35:00 AM

Luminous, my friend WW. A 7!

White Wolf
Date: 4/14/2017 4:16:00 AM

Thank you very much, Demetrios /|\