Luminosity:

Let love and light fill you,

Light to guide you in dark,

Love to fill your soul's, heart,

Limit yourself never,

Look always into light,

Lutenists will play songs,

Loudly within your mind.


April~14~2017

(6 syllables per line)

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Mark Martin

April 27, 2017 at 12:27 PM

Like the line "limit yourself never"! Congratulations ww! :-)

White Wolf

April 27, 2017 at 5:24 PM

Thank you, Mark /|\

Kim Merryman

April 19, 2017 at 10:09 PM

Thinking outside the box. I like the way you defined luminosity. Congrats on your win, White Wolf! Blessings, Kim

White Wolf

April 20, 2017 at 2:05 AM

Thank you very much, Kim /|\

Kim Rodrigues

April 18, 2017 at 4:04 PM

Congrats, WW!

White Wolf

April 18, 2017 at 5:43 PM

And congrats to you too, Kim /|\

Chuck Melugin

April 18, 2017 at 2:24 PM

Wolf, This beaming reflection shatters the darkness as it propels love at warp speed. 7 my best to you, chuck

White Wolf

April 18, 2017 at 5:43 PM

Live long and prosper, Chuck /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 18, 2017 at 1:29 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf

April 18, 2017 at 1:37 AM

Oh, that's so nice of you, thank you very much, Anne-Lise /|\

Lisa Ricci

April 17, 2017 at 5:38 PM

Hello White Wolf. Allow me to say Yes Yes and Yes. Light is always the way and a must. Luminosity indeed. Well done throughout. Honestly. Have a wonderful night or perhaps morning.

White Wolf

April 17, 2017 at 6:12 PM

Yes, it is morning over here in the land of Oz! Thank you for your visit today! I'm in a rush this morning, so cheers! /|\

Morgen Farmer

April 15, 2017 at 8:45 PM

Emotion runs deep in this poem. We all need some light to get us out of adversity. Well done wolf!

White Wolf

April 16, 2017 at 5:15 PM

Great to see you again, Morgen /|\

Emile Pinet

April 14, 2017 at 12:06 PM

Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words with great effect. Emile.

White Wolf

April 14, 2017 at 6:44 PM

Thank you so much, Emile /|\

Chris Green

April 14, 2017 at 8:55 AM

The perfect poetic path to follow. Nicely done my friend.

White Wolf

April 14, 2017 at 6:43 PM

Thanks heaps, Chris /|\

Robert Lindley

April 14, 2017 at 5:52 AM

Lovely and bright are flashes from fireflies and their dancing flights. Longingly I seek to again embrace such beautiful sights. Loudly my mind begs to go far back yet when I go I can not find my old tracks. Your poem brighten this old man's morn my friend.. Thank you.A7 and a fav..

White Wolf

April 14, 2017 at 6:42 AM

Sigh, what wonderful words you write, Robert! Even your comments are poetic my friend! Have a marvelous weekend matey! /|\