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Let Truth Be the Catalyst For Good

When lies are spread, destruction reigns. Hearts break and love bears ugly stains. Truth is obscured; grief lurks ahead. Destruction reigns when lies are spread. Truths may be told with harsh intent. No good results, for none was meant! Some wield cold truths with words so bold. With harsh intent, truths may be told. Half-truths arise, that heinous mix, the cause of hurts time may not fix. Confusion leads to Truth’s demise. That heinous mix, half-truths arise. Before we speak, let’s taste each word. Truth’s pure intent cannot be blurred by lies or spite if good we seek. Let’s taste each word before we speak. September 9, 2022 entered in the Swap Quatrain Contest Placed 6th Sponsor: Emile Pinet November 12, 2022 entered in the 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 20 Poetry Contest Placed 5th Sponsor: Mark Toney

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Date: 11/26/2022 7:48:00 AM
Well said Janice… a message to few of us (me) practice as often as we should. Congrats!!
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Date: 11/25/2022 9:37:00 AM
Dear Janice, a timely message wrapped in the beauty of your beautiful swap quatrain. An impressive and thought-provoking piece, masterfully expressed with an affecting last line for a grand finale. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/24/2022 9:33:00 AM
such an excellent message in rhyme, my friend. Big Congratulations to you.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/24/2022 10:33:00 AM
Andrea, thanks a million. You are very supportive of other poets. Have a great Thanksgiving. Janice
Date: 11/24/2022 8:43:00 AM
Janice, your quatrain should be a must-read every day for everyone worldwide! Reminds me of James 3:5-12. A Fav for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 20 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on because Mile 21 has already started. Also, check out my blog post to view your current standing in the Marathon.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/24/2022 10:34:00 AM
Mark, I am thrilled with my win. THANKS for sponsoring this marathon. Have a great Thanksgiving. Janice
Date: 10/21/2022 12:55:00 PM
Janice, your poem reminds me that words spoken can never be recaptured like feathers ripped from a pillow riding the wind. So well done. Words to ponder. Congratulations and blessings!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/23/2022 3:30:00 PM
Thanks SO much, Sam. Janice
Date: 10/20/2022 7:14:00 PM
Great message out there you’ve posted, Janice. We’re truthful when inner conflict ends. Warmest congrats on your win
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/23/2022 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Unseeking Seeker. Janice
Date: 10/20/2022 3:54:00 PM
Janice, wonderful write and good advice, and congratulations on your win in Emile's contest, blessings
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2022 5:04:00 PM
Constance, thank you SO much. Janice
Date: 10/20/2022 2:12:00 PM
A meal best served...well, you know :)) This is a great moral lesson and super poem Janice. Congratulations on your win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2022 5:03:00 PM
Thanks SO much, Linda. Janice
Date: 10/20/2022 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations Janice! Your poem earned you a distinguished place in my contest. This form is very challenging and tough to judge, but your poem made my list, very well done my friend, Emile.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2022 5:02:00 PM
Emile, thank you so much for sponsoring and for my win! I am thrilled. Janice
Date: 9/10/2022 5:17:00 AM
Excellent rhyming and message. Interesting to note your 1st line reversed in the 4th line of each 4 line stanza. I'd never heard of a swap quatrain before. I learn something new all the time here at PS. Good luck in the contest. Cheers - Gary
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/10/2022 7:52:00 AM
Gary, thanks a million for this positive comment! It took me a while to get the hang of this style! Janice
Date: 9/10/2022 4:35:00 AM
I like your poem and its message Janice--truth cannot be blurred----Let’s taste each word before we speak...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/10/2022 7:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 9/10/2022 1:57:00 AM
Bitter truths shouldn't be told harshly as truths can hurt for sure. A poem written in fab rhyme scheme wow! Kudos!! Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/10/2022 7:56:00 AM
S.zaynab, thanks so much! I have known people who seemed to think it was okay to tell ANYTHING, just because they knew it to be true. I certainly will read your newest poem. Janice
Date: 9/9/2022 8:40:00 PM
“Truths pure intent”…..I love this poem Janice…..so well written! Debx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/9/2022 9:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Deb. Janice
Date: 9/9/2022 3:08:00 PM
Your lines are very well written, Janice. Excellent swap quatrain.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/9/2022 9:46:00 PM
THANKS so much, Jenna! Janice

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