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Lesson Learned

promised me the moon sweet nothings in my ear.... alone this morning

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James Fraser

Date: 10/3/2010 2:51:00 PM

An event of yesterday, and it shall be an event in our tomorrows. Congrats Barbara on your win ;)

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 9/25/2010 8:40:00 PM

Hi Barbara few words expressing so much I can see why this was a winner, I liked it very much. luv June.

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/23/2010 2:24:00 AM

Beautiful image of the promise ever broken. Congrats on your win in the contest, Barb. Dan C

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/21/2010 9:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Barbara! You brought me laughter with this! Love, Audrey

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/21/2010 6:32:00 AM

this is my favourite. congrats on this fine winner. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 4:23:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 10:55:00 PM

Oh, now I see why you related to MINE .haha. Congratulations, dear Barbara!

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/20/2010 4:54:00 PM

We've all heard these "sweet nothings" and woke up alone, Barbara. This senryu has universal appeal. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Take care, Diane

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/20/2010 2:48:00 PM

A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2010 2:02:00 PM

Can really relate, dear LNC. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 9/20/2010 1:38:00 PM

A timeless Senyru Barbara. This situation must have happened thousands of time over history, and you have captured it splendidly >> James :)x

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/20/2010 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations on this 3rd place win in the contest, Barbara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/20/2010 12:32:00 PM

such a sad senryu but yup "lesson learned" indeed-- super congrats on your win with this Barbara :)-- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 11:51:00 AM

Congrats Barb on your super win in the Senryu contest.. an awesome victory .. enjoy with luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/20/2010 10:24:00 AM

such is life, great job, congrats on your win in the contest , love it

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/19/2010 9:21:00 PM

hope this is for chris' contest, love this, says everything in this Senryu. Harry