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Poetry contest: Three options in I, sponsored by Constance La France. Submitted on 7/25/25. Pic from inspired pencil.com.

“That first kiss, the moment when time stands still.” – Unknown We met at the park while walking my dog It was warm and the air was full of smog I was choking, and tried to catch my breath A man came with water, said he is Seth His eyes were sparkling blue and locked with mine He invited me to lunch, on his dime We met at the new café, at the bay Talking for hours, it was a special day Back at my car he asked me for a kiss We kissed as I felt butterflies and bliss

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Date: 7/25/2025 11:37:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Interlude" write. Pretty Picture... Great write but is it true??? "Good Luck" We both did this one. I was off the computer for a week and now way behind. Have a fun day/weekend writing away..........
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