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Interlude

“That first kiss, the moment when time stands still.” – Unknown

We met at the park while walking my dog
It was warm and the air was full of smog
I was choking, and tried to catch my breath
A man came with water, said he is Seth
His eyes were sparkling blue and locked with mine
He invited me to lunch, on his dime
We met at the new café, at the bay
Talking for hours, it was a special day
Back at my car he asked me for a kiss
We kissed as I felt butterflies and bliss

Copyright © Tania Kitchin | Year Posted 2025

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Eileen Manassian Date: 8/8/2025 11:10:00 AM Beautiful and sweet. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 8/8/2025 2:34:00 PM Eileen, thank you.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 8/1/2025 9:06:00 AM Suweet Tania! Congratulations! :) Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 8/1/2025 4:05:00 PM Linda, thank you.

Constance La France Date: 8/1/2025 6:13:00 AM Tania, congratulations on your win in my Three Options in I contest, I love your image and quote and your words are so beautifully penned, blessings ~ Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 8/1/2025 8:52:00 AM Constance, thank you and thank you for my placement.

Charles Messina Date: 7/31/2025 7:59:00 PM Oooh. Now I have the chills :) So nice, Tania. BOL in the contest! Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 8/1/2025 3:33:00 AM Charlie, thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/29/2025 3:20:00 AM - It turned out to be a romantic day ... congratulations on your win in the contest, Tania :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 7/29/2025 3:22:00 AM Anne-Lise, thank you.

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 7/28/2025 12:58:00 PM Congratulations on your win dear lovely Tania! Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 7/29/2025 3:22:00 AM Abdullah, thank you.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/28/2025 11:29:00 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Interlude" write again. Have a blessed day with your win................ Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 7/29/2025 3:22:00 AM Paula, thank you.

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 7/28/2025 5:11:00 AM Dear Tania, your words are simple in the best way, clean, honest, and human. You didn’t try to overcomplicate the magic. You just let it be. That’s not easy to do, but you nailed it. Great Read! Summer Blessings, Dear Tania, Danie Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 7/29/2025 3:23:00 AM Daniel, thank you, the challenge was keeping the lines at 10 syllables and 10 lines.

Unseeking Seeker Date: 7/27/2025 8:03:00 PM Oh my, my! Vibrance of love entwined with innocence ~ brings a smile to the face, mirroring a soft glow in the heart. Congratulations on your win, Tania Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 7/28/2025 3:33:00 AM U.S., thank you.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/26/2025 8:38:00 AM That's romance. May you have a long relation. Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 7/26/2025 4:59:00 PM Victor, thank you.

Lin Lane Date: 7/26/2025 7:48:00 AM An interlude of intimacy written so very romantically, Tania. Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 7/26/2025 8:05:00 AM Lin, thank you.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/25/2025 11:37:00 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Interlude" write. Pretty Picture... Great write but is it true??? "Good Luck" We both did this one. I was off the computer for a week and now way behind. Have a fun day/weekend writing away.......... Login to Reply