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House Detective

Sitting here watching TV about the Sherlock Homes tales,
 
we are all biting our nails.
                                             
Who done it we ask~was it the whales,
       
waiting for the next scene and details.
                           
The door bell rings,
                                                   
who can it be~we all chimed in like kings.
                     
There was no door bell ringing in the TV show,
             
Mr. Orange got up to see who was at our door,
 
a few minutes later he returned with a roar.
                     
We asked~who was at the door for fun,
                           
Mr. Orange said~no one.
                                               
With tomato sauce running down his chin,
                   
the evidence was in.
                                                   
Mr. Orange had eaten the whole pizza with a grin, 
         
John must re-order one for us or we will become thin.
     
Never leave Garfield alone with a pizza box,
                 
he just cannot help himself when it comes with lox.
       
As the writer and house detective there is no doubt,
     
I have just figured this one out.
Date Written: 7/19/2022

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Date: 7/27/2022 3:57:00 AM
Agatha Christie watch out...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/27/2022 1:02:00 PM
Thanks for your visit. I do not know if Agatha Christie would be proud of my House Detective write or not. You made my day with your very kind words. ~Thank You~ Glad you like this write. Garfield is a real character. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/26/2022 12:35:00 PM
I enjoyed the sleuthing in this poem very much, Paula. What a fun write! This is in my faves. :D
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2022 12:41:00 PM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed my cute/fun "House Detective" write. Garfield is a real fun/crazy cat to read about. I really enjoyed writing about him. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/26/2022 12:33:00 PM
this is SO cute. My favorite of the detective stories I have yet seen.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2022 12:40:00 PM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed my cute write about crazy Garfield. It was really fun writing about him. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/25/2022 9:06:00 AM
Hi Linda, What a fun poem! Didn't know where it was going for the most part and that made it intriguing and all the more fun. - Gail
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2022 12:18:00 PM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed my fun/crazy "House Detective" write. Garfield is a real fun character. I loved writing about him. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/23/2022 8:43:00 AM
Hahahaha Paula. Garfield is such a character! Linda
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2022 11:18:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you like my "House Detective" write. I love to give out smiles/laughs. They are free. Yes, Garfield is a real character and I love him. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/22/2022 4:16:00 PM
Fun read my poetess friend. I enjoyed the read, Paula. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2022 11:16:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed my "House Detective" write. It was so mush fun to write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/22/2022 10:06:00 AM
Agatha Cristie would be proud, so much food for thought! Robert
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2022 10:48:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. I do not know if Agatha Christie would be proud of this write or not. You just made my day with your very kind words. "Thank You" Glad you found my "House Detective" write food for thought. Garfield and food go together. So much fun to write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/21/2022 10:04:00 AM
One of your best and a fave! I really love this. Panagiota xxx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2022 10:37:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. I see fave??? You just made my day. "Thank You" Glad you love my "House Detective" write. I had a ton of fun writing it. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/21/2022 9:54:00 AM
What a witty write dear Paula, isn't it nice when we can find all the clues, way to go, xo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2022 10:34:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed my fun "House Detective" write. The clues sure help to the Mystery being solved. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/21/2022 2:02:00 AM
A fun write there paula! Always has been a fan of detectives! Have a great day and thanks for commenting on my poem!! :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2022 10:33:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed my fun "House Detective" write. Always A Mystery To Solved. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/20/2022 7:05:00 PM
Really masterfully done, Paula -- how you stitched this one together. Great!! :) gw
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2022 10:32:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Your kind words made my day. "Thanks" Glad you like my "House Detective" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/20/2022 5:28:00 PM
Hi Paula, Couldn't help but giggle as I read on :-D Nicely done! I enjoyed reading your "House Detective" Cheers my friend :-)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2022 10:29:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you giggled with my "House Detective" write. I love to give out smiles/laughs. They are also free. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/20/2022 1:23:00 PM
Mystery solved! lol
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2022 10:27:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed my fun/cute "House Detective" write. Mystery solved!!! Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Date: 7/19/2022 5:36:00 PM
I enjoyed this creative, fun poem Paula. Great one :) Happy writing!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2022 9:17:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed my fun "House Detective" write. I had a ball writing it. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................