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~~~~~~^^^^^^~~~~~~~ "This poem is not about what is written But what is not written" Sun has shone, glimpsing behind the clouds - EMPTY. Tree grows at the sand,without any drop of water - DESERTED. Butterflies survive without any single drop of nectar - THIRSTY. A human is living without nothing - WORTHLESS. Dwelling at nowhere - MISSING. Dry air is what everything has - BEGGING. Almost lifeless. SORROW, NOTHINGNESS, HUNGRINESS - FELT. BUT LOVE had eaten the IMPOSSIBILITIES - Coz' LOVE is the only FLOWER That grows and blossoms Without the aid of the SEASONS! ... ~~~~~~~~^^^^^~~~~~~~~ ***JUN- JUN VILLANUEVA ****THE UNWRITTEN ***** JULY 02, 2011

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Date: 7/8/2011 6:42:00 PM
thanks and cograts to you also well written Love conquers all
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:38:00 PM
Hey, I am now going thru the list of winners and seeing you are on it. WAY to GO, Jun Jun! Congratulations to you.
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Date: 7/7/2011 1:16:00 PM
Very deep, and meaningful and a complete, observant interpretation of the picture. EXCELLENT! Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 7/6/2011 6:52:00 AM
Many congratulations on this win in the contest, jun. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/6/2011 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "The Unwritten" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:47:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest, jun-jun
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Date: 7/5/2011 1:19:00 PM
creative; a real pinoy art! … swinging cheers to you for the amazing award, jun!! :) huggs
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Date: 7/5/2011 12:40:00 PM
congrats jun-jun on your super win with this dynamite write luv.. knew it would be on the winners podium ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:55:00 AM
You really put a lot of free expression in this poem Jun-Jun! Congrats on an amazing entry!
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:36:00 AM
Many congrats, Jun-jun: )
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations Jun on your win in my contest with this splendid poem~~
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:35:00 PM
YOu got quite a message into this one. I like that line Love had eaten the impossibilites. Unique!
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Date: 7/2/2011 9:43:00 AM
very nice presentation of end line word form making a sentence jun-jun.. creative and clever ..good luck in the contest with this unique piece luv..
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