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Cold Mist

the fog rises up from snow piles like ghosts.... cold mist flies away ~Strict Haiku 2 contest~

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Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/29/2011 10:50:00 AM

Very Nice! I can see it...Christine

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 7:48:00 PM

wow! love it~SKAT

Constance La France

Date: 1/7/2011 6:15:00 AM

Well, this is "beautiful" and I see this in Canada all the time, that white mist rising and floating~~

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/5/2011 5:36:00 AM

awesome Haiku Michael, good luck in contest. Harry

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 1/4/2011 2:40:00 PM

This is a good haiku Micheal.Thanks for your kind comment.Teresa

Deb Radke

Date: 1/4/2011 10:11:00 AM

Oh, this is good also, Michael. I see we are both writing 'chilly' haikus. Thank you for all the kind comments lately. I am most grateful. I'm trying to catch up on all the poems I have missed in the last two weeks. I need to read more of yours. This one is very good. Love, Deb

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/3/2011 6:53:00 AM

I love this, I also like how you have laid it out on the page, I find it hard enough to just cut and paste LOL. This is beautiful, the fog, snow and flying mist, very lofty, floating, calm

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/3/2011 6:43:00 AM

Stunning imagery Michael, good luck for the contest ;-) love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2011 10:27:00 PM

Nice one, Michael. Like that poem I wrote of the Ghost that travels far, who was the mist!! Love that metaphor. Luv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/2/2011 6:49:00 PM

I love the imagery, Michael. Beautiful picture in my mind's eye! Wishing you good luck in Charles's Haiku 2 contest! Always, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/2/2011 5:45:00 PM

very nice haiku with apt images for the contest of Charles, Good luck in the contest. Michael

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/2/2011 5:13:00 PM

simply fascinating in it's sense of fluidity, michael... best of luck in the contest.. :) nette

John Rhinem

Date: 1/2/2011 4:54:00 PM

Smile ~ Quite a Haiku "My 'Dear Friend, Michael J. Falotico!!!'" ~ Seems as a moment amid natures view and also as possibly a metaphor perhaps? Either or, brushed from the bright lights of a talented and "Precious 'Life & Soul' &, Yes, 'Happy New Year' Unto 'You' Too 'My Friend'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Good to See 'You' &, Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening; 'Great Poe;" Bye!:) ~

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/2/2011 2:42:00 PM

Hi Michael. Thanks for the visit. i struggle with Haiku as I never use 10 words if I can get away with 100. Great write and the very best of luck in the contest. Eamon

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/2/2011 2:30:00 PM

I am looking out on sunshine, keep your snow Michael, wonderful haiku, good luck in the contest

Daver Austin

Date: 1/2/2011 8:06:00 AM

A very frosty, but good, write. DAve

Nick Faber

Date: 1/2/2011 8:00:00 AM

very nice. a good visual poem is my favorite. thank you guys for welcoming me. im a very amateur writer but i love it. it comes natural to me. thanks again

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/2/2011 7:46:00 AM

What imagery Michael.. what thoughts in this piece.. good luck in the contest by Chaz... and a breathtaking scene painted with powerful words my friend... GMEN ROCK... be positive now... with luv from your Jersey Girl forever and always with luv to W.K...

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/2/2011 7:28:00 AM

Lovely scene here Michael and so very topical. Good luck Déirdre Ó Maidín

Deb Wilson

Date: 1/2/2011 7:13:00 AM

lovely haiku Michael..I can see the scene you painted! love,Deb

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/2/2011 6:48:00 AM

Good one..Good luck in the contest with this excellent Haiku..Sara