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Cold Mist

the fog rises up

        from snow piles like ghosts....

             cold mist flies away





~Strict Haiku 2 contest~

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Christine A Kysely

January 29, 2011 at 10:50 AM

Very Nice! I can see it...Christine

Skat A

January 16, 2011 at 7:48 PM

wow! love it~SKAT

Constance La France

January 7, 2011 at 6:15 AM

Well, this is "beautiful" and I see this in Canada all the time, that white mist rising and floating~~

Harry Horsman

January 5, 2011 at 5:36 AM

awesome Haiku Michael, good luck in contest. Harry

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

January 4, 2011 at 2:40 PM

This is a good haiku Micheal.Thanks for your kind comment.Teresa

Deb Radke

January 4, 2011 at 10:11 AM

Oh, this is good also, Michael. I see we are both writing 'chilly' haikus. Thank you for all the kind comments lately. I am most grateful. I'm trying to catch up on all the poems I have missed in the last two weeks. I need to read more of yours. This one is very good. Love, Deb

Eiken Laan

January 3, 2011 at 6:53 AM

I love this, I also like how you have laid it out on the page, I find it hard enough to just cut and paste LOL. This is beautiful, the fog, snow and flying mist, very lofty, floating, calm

Wilma Neels

January 3, 2011 at 6:43 AM

Stunning imagery Michael, good luck for the contest ;-) love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

January 2, 2011 at 10:27 PM

Nice one, Michael. Like that poem I wrote of the Ghost that travels far, who was the mist!! Love that metaphor. Luv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

January 2, 2011 at 6:49 PM

I love the imagery, Michael. Beautiful picture in my mind's eye! Wishing you good luck in Charles's Haiku 2 contest! Always, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 2, 2011 at 5:45 PM

very nice haiku with apt images for the contest of Charles, Good luck in the contest. Michael

Nette Onclaud

January 2, 2011 at 5:13 PM

simply fascinating in it's sense of fluidity, michael... best of luck in the contest.. :) nette

John Rhinem

January 2, 2011 at 4:54 PM

Smile ~ Quite a Haiku "My 'Dear Friend, Michael J. Falotico!!!'" ~ Seems as a moment amid natures view and also as possibly a metaphor perhaps? Either or, brushed from the bright lights of a talented and "Precious 'Life & Soul' &, Yes, 'Happy New Year' Unto 'You' Too 'My Friend'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Good to See 'You' &, Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening; 'Great Poe;" Bye!:) ~

Eamon Duffin

January 2, 2011 at 2:42 PM

Hi Michael. Thanks for the visit. i struggle with Haiku as I never use 10 words if I can get away with 100. Great write and the very best of luck in the contest. Eamon

Francine Roberts

January 2, 2011 at 2:30 PM

I am looking out on sunshine, keep your snow Michael, wonderful haiku, good luck in the contest

Daver Austin

January 2, 2011 at 8:06 AM

A very frosty, but good, write. DAve

Nick Faber

January 2, 2011 at 8:00 AM

very nice. a good visual poem is my favorite. thank you guys for welcoming me. im a very amateur writer but i love it. it comes natural to me. thanks again

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 2, 2011 at 7:46 AM

What imagery Michael.. what thoughts in this piece.. good luck in the contest by Chaz... and a breathtaking scene painted with powerful words my friend... GMEN ROCK... be positive now... with luv from your Jersey Girl forever and always with luv to W.K...