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Castle In the Sky

lets take our mind back in time . so we bulit a castle in the sky . its full of golden angels , that whisper pure sweet alaibies. oh castle in the sky you saved me from my own discret . i built you to show me the finer joys of my inner mind. castle in the sky i always want to find myself flying around up high , in the city i built of my imigination . my castle in the sky you are beautiful just the way you are . love the senory of how you stand so tall. castle in the sky i will always know why . the birds tell us if we listen hard enough.

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Date: 4/1/2017 9:07:00 AM
I love this poem! Nicely put together, Ashley. good write/good read.
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Date: 1/6/2017 5:40:00 PM
wat place did i win and thank you every1
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Date: 1/5/2017 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Kai
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 1/6/2017 5:40:00 PM
wat place did i win ?
Date: 1/4/2017 2:18:00 PM
Congrats well done x
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Date: 1/4/2017 8:05:00 AM
Ashley, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/12/2016 2:01:00 AM
The scenery is fine, just needs work on the grammar.
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