Castle In the Sky

lets take our mind back in time .
so we bulit a castle in the sky .
its full of golden angels , that whisper pure sweet alaibies.
oh castle in the sky you saved me from my own discret .
i built you to show me the finer joys of my inner mind.
castle in the sky i always want to find myself flying around up high , in the city i built of my imigination . 
my castle in the sky you are beautiful just the way you are .
love the senory of how you stand so tall.
castle in the sky i will always know why .
the birds tell us if we listen hard enough.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Zerlaut Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 9:07 AM
I love this poem! Nicely put together, Ashley. good write/good read.
Rainwater Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 5:40 PM
wat place did i win and thank you every1
Neumann Avatar
January 5, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on your win. Kai
Rainwater Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 5:40 PM
wat place did i win ?
Rycroft Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Congrats well done x
Roper Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 8:05 AM
Ashley, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 2:01 AM
The scenery is fine, just needs work on the grammar.
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