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For the Lady of Shallot Contest Just sit back and hear a tale About some folks that chose to sail In a boat, that was so frail Caught up in a mighty gale Surely, not my style Watch the ship as it gets tossed It sure looks like, "All is lost" If not for the courage of the crew and Boss They never could've, made it across Here to Gillian's Isle

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Date: 10/28/2014 7:56:00 PM
Congrats Jerry on such a fine win...Sharon G. Another write I truly enjoyed.
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Date: 9/15/2014 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jerry. The first half I never would of guessed but by the middle of the second half I was really hoping for that brilliant ending. I loved it.
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Date: 9/15/2014 9:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:39:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win, Jerry
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Date: 9/14/2014 10:03:00 PM
Jerry, what a kick! Congrats. BG
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Date: 9/14/2014 9:53:00 PM
Jerry, finely constructed winner !
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Date: 9/14/2014 9:54:00 PM
Strangely familiar, but I'm no professor ;)
Date: 8/17/2014 5:41:00 PM
Great now I got that song stuck in my
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 8/17/2014 5:52:00 PM
Better yours than mine, lol----I hope Isaiah appreciates what I had to go through for this, lol