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For the Lady of Shallot Contest


Just sit back and hear a tale
About some folks that chose to sail
In a boat, that was so frail 
Caught up in a mighty gale
Surely, not my style

Watch the ship as it gets tossed
It sure looks like,  "All is lost"
If not for the courage of the crew and Boss
They never could've, made it across 
Here to Gillian's Isle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gulley Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 7:56 PM
Congrats Jerry on such a fine win...Sharon G. Another write I truly enjoyed.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Congratulations on your win Jerry. The first half I never would of guessed but by the middle of the second half I was really hoping for that brilliant ending. I loved it.
Lindley Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Congrats on your win!!
Mehta Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 1:39 AM
Congrats on the fine win, Jerry
Gorelick Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 10:03 PM
Jerry, what a kick! Congrats. BG
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 5:41 PM
Great now I got that song stuck in my head...lol
Curtis Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 5:52 PM
Better yours than mine, lol----I hope Isaiah appreciates what I had to go through for this, lol
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