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- the Heart Surrenders To the Truth -

A dream caught up in the night's magic and splendor sitting at the driving seat turning feelings I realize every moment must be achieved emotions labors in the heart's toil So many truths dreams and desire envelopes standing in front of these eyes lids open wide Remember the words we said swore to protect and honor the joy in all we experienced together Drumming beats echo warm softly Love found our soul naked and clean purified soft snow melting desire queen The red rose whispers of passion and amor petals tremble upon a breathless air With fragrant meanings tides turn where the sweetest perfume blows divine flashing one spirit sparkling dewdrops horizon What can be as bright as the sun Colors a bridge to only god knows The dream of a life beyond all none can compare were we could fly everywhere with angel wings inside each others heartbeat complete Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid A Collaborated Poem 21.10.2015

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Lystra Siew

Date: 11/12/2015 11:46:00 AM

Firstly thank you Anne for the kind words. I love the way your words dances with emotions.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2015 12:20:00 PM

- Lystra, thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein

Date: 10/26/2015 5:36:00 PM

Wow! This is a very beautiful poem.....great collaboration Anne and Liam u both nailed it.... I really enjoyed reading it.... :)

Thomas Martin

Date: 10/26/2015 12:54:00 PM

Great write!! Last stanza so memorable: Love the last two lines particularly about angels flying in heartbeats.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2015 1:22:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Thomas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elis Artis

Date: 10/25/2015 10:02:00 AM

Another productive collab! This is a masterpiece

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2015 1:21:00 PM

- Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Elis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 10/24/2015 3:50:00 PM

"Drumming beats echo warm softly Love found our soul naked and clean" wow. Your collabos always produces so much beauty. 7+

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2015 1:20:00 PM

- Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Njeri :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/24/2015 1:42:00 AM

Lovely poem...lovely thoughts. Anne and LIam, congrats on another successful collab! The last line is tops "inside each others heartbeat complete"! 7. hugs to both of you...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2015 1:20:00 PM

- Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/23/2015 3:24:00 PM

With words like these, how could a heart not surrender!! Another lovely collaboration. Full marks to both of you! ~ Warm regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2015 1:20:00 PM

- Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/23/2015 2:23:00 PM

Congrats to both of you Anne-Lise and Liam. Solid performance, the passions excels! A7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2015 1:19:00 PM

- Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Neva Romaine

Date: 10/23/2015 12:53:00 PM

Hey Anne Lise, stopped by for a visit. An absolutely beautiful poem collaboration from you and Liam. Filled with deep and passionate love and longing. Excellent writing and expression from you both! Be Blessed, Neva

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2015 1:19:00 PM

- Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Neva :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2015 3:21:00 PM

You guys make a magical duo!! Beautiful sentiments in this poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2015 1:18:00 PM

- Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Patricia Opel Jaye

Date: 10/22/2015 2:46:00 PM

Anne beautiful I'm in awe of your poetry. I enjoyed reading your poetry I look forward to reading more of your work.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2015 1:18:00 PM

- Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Patricia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/22/2015 5:16:00 AM

Splendid collaboration Anne Lise and Liam.. =`) your brush match well... =`)~Olive Eloisa

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2015 6:42:00 AM

- Olive, thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/22/2015 2:33:00 AM

Your verses will make, even the Muse herself, envious! Congratulations to both of you, Anne-Lise and Liam! This is beyond marvelous! A seven to each!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2015 2:48:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/21/2015 3:15:00 PM

A wonderful collaboration A-L and Liam

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2015 11:34:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/21/2015 3:02:00 PM

Hi Ann Lise n' Liam! Another very beautiful, romantic passionate, and captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Just awesome!A most beautiful dreamy sweet romantic love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Just wonderful!So very beautiful and sweet.Very enchanting!I just love it!Superb imagery!Just excellent.Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + to each!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2015 11:33:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2015 2:08:00 PM

Some very good metaphorical language..I enjoyed reading this one today...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2015 11:32:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/21/2015 2:00:00 PM

your pen anne lise sparkled beautiful in this thank you deeply for the pleasure as always it shines wishing you a blessed evening pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2015 2:06:00 PM

- Same words goes to you, Liam - I wish you a lovely evening and a great day tomorrow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)