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Sweet Sweet Nectar ~ A job well done Busy Bee.

Ode to the bumble bee Only sipping nectar Offer from the flower Outstanding aroma, of honeysuckle smell Orchestra; Buzz .. buzz... buzz .... Oh the nature so pure 16.03.2018 Sun :) A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Each line has 6 syllables 26 words 42 syllables (poem in the Pleiades form) *Oblivion A state of being unaware of what's happening around you

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Roy Pett

Date: 3/20/2018 5:01:00 PM

beautifully written Pleiades Anne-Lise, Great form and lovely theme thoroughly enjoyed. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2018 2:46:00 PM

- Roy, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 3/19/2018 5:46:00 AM

I love this form of poetry and I love this poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2018 2:45:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/18/2018 2:18:00 PM

It's buzzing beautifully sweet... hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2018 2:52:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/18/2018 1:10:00 PM

Bzzz....I love bees and wasps even, it's a good thing I see many bumble bees around again since the cell phone scare, you made me miss spring in this delightful write Anne-Lise;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2018 2:51:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Keith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/18/2018 10:10:00 AM

Beautiful Pleiades Ann...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2018 12:31:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/18/2018 2:48:00 AM

Lovely little piece, Anne-Lise, and right now I needed that little dose of sunshine. Thanks. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2018 7:28:00 AM

- Viv, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/17/2018 2:00:00 PM

you are one greeat honeybee, and more so a flower of delight, anne... grreat job; happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2018 7:35:00 AM

- Nette, thanks for your visit and sweet comment :) - Enjoy your sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/16/2018 6:53:00 PM

I love it, Sunshine! I also love honeysuckle without the bees.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2018 7:28:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/16/2018 6:23:00 PM

I'm buzzing with delight reading your charming poem:-) I loved the contests Kim sponsored and hope she will continue the alphabet theme again one day:-0 hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2018 7:32:00 AM

- Yes, it was competition that I liked very much, Jan - I rarely see Kim on "soup" now - Thanks for your visit and comment :) - Enjoy your sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 3/16/2018 2:23:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , the humble bubble bee where would we be ::))) great write my friend happy weekend ::))) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/16/2018 3:06:00 PM

- Watch out ... the humble bubble bee .... behind your left ear, Niall :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment and happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/16/2018 10:53:00 AM

Conjures images of summer, Haven't seen this type of form before , im still learning. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/16/2018 3:03:00 PM

- It is really many forms I do not know, Tom - We can not know all of them, but this is not difficult :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)