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- a Scent of Love Perfume -

My lips burning within longing to meet yours my dearest orchid I will never ever leave you As in the softest touch commands obedience Breathtaking aroma a soul thirsty drifting faraway when I close my eyes Nightly dreaming of you Inside a cotton breath each and every heartbeat skips warm With you my angel, life feels so complete Eastern flower of extreme beauty chants You're the greatest blessing and always will be for me whispering jasmine Kissing the very air one breathes Glittering stars cannot compare with the sparkle of your eyes Sailing over the moon silver dreams Your starlight enchanting blinks upon destinies path As the shadows of the moonlight cast magic pearly beams spell deep pleasure fills delight Wishes dance within the tune of loves beat Fluttering playfully in the breeze walking into the clouds this heart and soul weeps My thoughts slowly not believing the truth that you've flown away without me Embracing you in heaven one day I hope it will be true Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 14.07.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 7/23/2015 3:29:00 PM
Hi Anne, May I offer my services to drive away the burn of your lips??? hhhhhhhh Really a nice poem. Thanks for sharing it with us
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2015 3:04:00 AM
- I have full control over my lips, thanks - Anne-Lise
Date: 7/19/2015 12:22:00 AM
Wow! So beautiful poem my dear friend, Anne Lise! I love it and thoroughly enjoyed the read. Hand salute again to both of my faovourite great poets here. Thank you so much for sharing and for everything. Happy weekend to you both! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/19/2015 7:13:00 AM
- A pleasure to share with you, dear friend Leonora - You always brings a smile and kind words ..... thanks ! - A big bear hug to you // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/18/2015 1:14:00 PM
Such sweet words wrote down here Dear-Love Ettie
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/19/2015 7:10:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Ettie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/16/2015 6:26:00 PM
sad and deep sentiments so radiantly expressed... heavenly love on a friday, anne... huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/17/2015 4:52:00 AM
- Nette, thanks for visit and beautiful comment on our poems - A Scent Of Love Perfume - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/16/2015 1:27:00 PM
Hello Anne-Lise and Liam!! Liam already revealed some of the text to me over the phone when you guys were working this one together. What can I say, but Most Excellent and Most Wonderful!! The flow of the verses and the imagery are most enchanting. Okay you two: A "7" + FAV in my book of records!! Best Always, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/17/2015 4:54:00 AM
- A book I highly appreciate " Your Book of Records " - Thank you my friend Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/16/2015 9:18:00 AM
That 3rd to last line came to me as such a surprise. I hadn't realised. Congrats to both on a very clever write.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/17/2015 4:56:00 AM
- Thanks, my friend Scott - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/16/2015 7:05:00 AM
love this collab, strong sentiment, and a joy to read.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/17/2015 4:55:00 AM
- Thanks, my friend Harry - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/16/2015 2:13:00 AM
Beautiful imagery write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2015 1:56:00 PM
- Thanks my friend Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/15/2015 8:34:00 PM
Anne Lise my friend and also Liam!! Both pf you! your lines are striking and so with the imagery.. what I love about your poetry is that how you cut your lines!! it gives the reader to go more and the desired effect is wow!!! ~Olive Eloisa =')
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/17/2015 4:57:00 AM
- Olive, thanks for visit and beautiful comment on our poems - A Scent Of Love Perfume - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/15/2015 3:17:00 PM
Beautiful, delightful Anne Lise and Liam. The loving passionate imagery is a joy to picture, nice one//James :) :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2015 1:54:00 PM
- James, thanks for visit and beautiful comment on our poems - A Scent Of Love Perfume - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/15/2015 7:36:00 AM
Pure romantic magic that casts its spell of love upon the heart! Congratulations to both: Anne -Lise and Liam, Liam and Anne-Lise and a seven to each!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2015 11:43:00 AM
- My friend Demetrios, thanks for visit a 7 and beautiful comment on our poems - A Scent Of Love Perfume - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/14/2015 8:42:00 PM
Another hot one, you two write well together. Bravo!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2015 11:46:00 AM
- Love is not easy - Thank you Richard for your visit and great comments - Nice that you liked our poem - A Scent Of Love Perfume - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/14/2015 8:43:00 PM
Sometimes the truth can be painful but in the end passionate memories remain within the soul.
Date: 7/14/2015 7:25:00 PM
You both have written such a lovely piece. The image of passion, love and longing are so well seen. I hope you have been well Anne-Lise, been too long since I have read your work. Take care my dear friend, Jess :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2015 11:42:00 AM
- Thanks dear Jess, always nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/14/2015 6:00:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!A very beautiful romantic and captivating love poem written by you my dearest friends.Very enchanting piece.Just dazzling!A most beautiful romantic dreamy sweet and passionate love poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautifully written.A real gem!Just awesome!Enjoyed it very much.Fantastic collaboration!Great imagery!I love it!A 7+++ to each!A fav.Your pens are truly mighty golden!Wishing you a very lovely week!Keep your faith Liam.In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2015 11:40:00 AM
- Dorian, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/14/2015 5:01:00 PM
stunning imagery Anne Lise and Liam WOW what a romantic collaboration :-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2015 11:39:00 AM
- Dear Jan, thanks for visit a 7 and beautiful comment on our poems - A Scent Of Love Perfume - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/14/2015 5:00:00 PM
such a deep pleasure mixing ink anne lise your words sang out in such a beautiful tune passing you a warm smile thanks pal also thank you everyone for the heartfelt warm beautiful comments deeply touching wishing you all a lovely week
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2015 11:18:00 AM
- Dear Liam .... I "mixing ink" with joy :) - thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/14/2015 2:38:00 PM
So enchanting and romantic A-L and Liam..One of your best...Tim
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2015 4:13:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/14/2015 10:19:00 AM
beautiful imagery! i enjoyed...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2015 10:43:00 AM
- Thanks Ilene, always nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/14/2015 10:09:00 AM
Always a joy for me to see another of your collabs, Anne and Liam. A 7 all the way for this sweet write of devotion. hugs to you both! :-))
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2015 10:13:00 AM
- Thank you dear Kim, it's always nice to see you - I am happy that you enjoy our "love poems" - A pleasure to write and share :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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