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- A Scent of Love Perfume -

My lips burning within longing 
to meet yours my dearest orchid 
I will never ever leave you
As in the softest touch commands obedience 
Breathtaking aroma a soul thirsty
drifting faraway when I close my eyes 
Nightly dreaming of you 

Inside a cotton breath 
each and every heartbeat skips warm
With you my angel, life feels so complete
Eastern flower of extreme beauty chants 
You're the greatest blessing 
and always will be for me whispering jasmine 
Kissing the very air one breathes 

Glittering stars cannot compare 
with the sparkle of your eyes
Sailing over the moon silver dreams 
Your starlight enchanting blinks 
upon destinies path 
As the shadows of the moonlight cast magic
pearly beams spell deep pleasure fills delight 
Wishes dance within the tune of loves beat

Fluttering playfully in the breeze 
walking into the clouds this heart and soul weeps 
My thoughts slowly not believing the truth
that you've flown away without me
Embracing you in heaven one day 
I hope it will be true





Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  14.07.2015 
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Aejaz Zafar Date: 7/23/2015 3:29:00 PM Hi Anne, May I offer my services to drive away the burn of your lips??? hhhhhhhh Really a nice poem. Thanks for sharing it with us Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/24/2015 3:04:00 AM - I have full control over my lips, thanks - Anne-Lise

Len Gasun Date: 7/19/2015 12:22:00 AM Wow! So beautiful poem my dear friend, Anne Lise! I love it and thoroughly enjoyed the read. Hand salute again to both of my faovourite great poets here. Thank you so much for sharing and for everything. Happy weekend to you both! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2015 7:13:00 AM - A pleasure to share with you, dear friend Leonora - You always brings a smile and kind words ..... thanks ! - A big bear hug to you // Anne-Lise :)

Ettie Christian-Bowling Date: 7/18/2015 1:14:00 PM Such sweet words wrote down here Dear-Love Ettie Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/19/2015 7:10:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Ettie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/16/2015 6:26:00 PM sad and deep sentiments so radiantly expressed... heavenly love on a friday, anne... huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2015 4:52:00 AM - Nette, thanks for visit and beautiful comment on our poems - A Scent Of Love Perfume - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 7/16/2015 1:27:00 PM Hello Anne-Lise and Liam!! Liam already revealed some of the text to me over the phone when you guys were working this one together. What can I say, but Most Excellent and Most Wonderful!! The flow of the verses and the imagery are most enchanting. Okay you two: A "7" + FAV in my book of records!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2015 4:54:00 AM - A book I highly appreciate " Your Book of Records " - Thank you my friend Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 7/16/2015 9:18:00 AM That 3rd to last line came to me as such a surprise. I hadn't realised. Congrats to both on a very clever write. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2015 4:56:00 AM - Thanks, my friend Scott - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman Date: 7/16/2015 7:05:00 AM love this collab, strong sentiment, and a joy to read. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2015 4:55:00 AM - Thanks, my friend Harry - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/16/2015 2:13:00 AM Beautiful imagery write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/16/2015 1:56:00 PM - Thanks my friend Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/15/2015 8:34:00 PM Anne Lise my friend and also Liam!! Both pf you! your lines are striking and so with the imagery.. what I love about your poetry is that how you cut your lines!! it gives the reader to go more and the desired effect is wow!!! ~Olive Eloisa =') Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2015 4:57:00 AM - Olive, thanks for visit and beautiful comment on our poems - A Scent Of Love Perfume - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Fraser Date: 7/15/2015 3:17:00 PM Beautiful, delightful Anne Lise and Liam. The loving passionate imagery is a joy to picture, nice one//James :) :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/16/2015 1:54:00 PM - James, thanks for visit and beautiful comment on our poems - A Scent Of Love Perfume - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/15/2015 7:36:00 AM Pure romantic magic that casts its spell of love upon the heart! Congratulations to both: Anne -Lise and Liam, Liam and Anne-Lise and a seven to each! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/15/2015 11:43:00 AM - My friend Demetrios, thanks for visit a 7 and beautiful comment on our poems - A Scent Of Love Perfume - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/14/2015 8:42:00 PM Another hot one, you two write well together. Bravo! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/15/2015 11:46:00 AM - Love is not easy - Thank you Richard for your visit and great comments - Nice that you liked our poem - A Scent Of Love Perfume - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/14/2015 8:43:00 PM Sometimes the truth can be painful but in the end passionate memories remain within the soul.

Jessica Thompson Date: 7/14/2015 7:25:00 PM You both have written such a lovely piece. The image of passion, love and longing are so well seen. I hope you have been well Anne-Lise, been too long since I have read your work. Take care my dear friend, Jess :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/15/2015 11:42:00 AM - Thanks dear Jess, always nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/14/2015 6:00:00 PM Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!A very beautiful romantic and captivating love poem written by you my dearest friends.Very enchanting piece.Just dazzling!A most beautiful romantic dreamy sweet and passionate love poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautifully written.A real gem!Just awesome!Enjoyed it very much.Fantastic collaboration!Great imagery!I love it!A 7+++ to each!A fav.Your pens are truly mighty golden!Wishing you a very lovely week!Keep your faith Liam.In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/15/2015 11:40:00 AM - Dorian, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 7/14/2015 5:01:00 PM stunning imagery Anne Lise and Liam WOW what a romantic collaboration :-) hugs Jan xx 7 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/15/2015 11:39:00 AM - Dear Jan, thanks for visit a 7 and beautiful comment on our poems - A Scent Of Love Perfume - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 7/14/2015 5:00:00 PM such a deep pleasure mixing ink anne lise your words sang out in such a beautiful tune passing you a warm smile thanks pal also thank you everyone for the heartfelt warm beautiful comments deeply touching wishing you all a lovely week Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/15/2015 11:18:00 AM - Dear Liam .... I "mixing ink" with joy :) - thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 7/14/2015 2:38:00 PM So enchanting and romantic A-L and Liam..One of your best...Tim Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/14/2015 4:13:00 PM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer Date: 7/14/2015 10:19:00 AM beautiful imagery! i enjoyed... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/14/2015 10:43:00 AM - Thanks Ilene, always nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez Date: 7/14/2015 10:09:00 AM Always a joy for me to see another of your collabs, Anne and Liam. A 7 all the way for this sweet write of devotion. hugs to you both! :-)) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/14/2015 10:13:00 AM - Thank you dear Kim, it's always nice to see you - I am happy that you enjoy our "love poems" - A pleasure to write and share :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)