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---Rose Petals Garden

rose petal's garden thorns raking an open eye trimmed bush barren bare blood let the face of mourning--- sweet cherry of virgin light Contest: Tanka me a Dream Poet: Debbie Guzzi

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:42:00 PM

loving your tankas,,, a very good win..pd

Virginia Frayer

Date: 2/25/2011 2:07:00 PM

Congrats on this wonderful write! luv ~Virginia

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2011 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/23/2011 1:45:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your 2nd place win in my contest!!! luv Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/23/2011 1:29:00 AM

your imagery in this tanka is just amazing, Debbie! Enjoyed the alliteration you have here too-- super congrats on your win :) hugs

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/22/2011 9:12:00 AM

Quite a vivid write Deb! Congratulations to you ;)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/22/2011 9:09:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your super win in the Dream Tanka contest.. enjoy another top ten victory and success with luv...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/22/2011 7:36:00 AM

verry cubist and impressive, debs.. an extraordinary tanka that lights! super duper congrats for bagging a big win! :) huggs, nette

Kash Poet

Date: 2/22/2011 6:00:00 AM

Sweet cherry of virgin light---amzing words you have penned Debbie!Congrats on your big win.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/21/2011 11:23:00 PM

Great win in Michael's contest with this fine entry. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2011 10:57:00 PM

I sure love that final line, sweet cherry of virgin light. Breathaking, Deb. Congratulations!

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/21/2011 9:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Deb! Love, Annalise

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/21/2011 8:34:00 PM

Wow. Debbie. some terrific use of metaphors here. Many congratulations my dear friend.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/21/2011 5:38:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Michael, deb

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/21/2011 5:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your second place win, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2011 4:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/21/2011 3:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win Debbie although I am not sure I get it. Love,, Joyce

Daver Austin

Date: 2/19/2011 2:30:00 PM

Had to read this several times. Transcendental - yes? If not, fill me in. Love, Dave

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/18/2011 10:05:00 AM

Great imagery and the last line is quit provocative. Nice work, Deb! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/18/2011 9:09:00 AM

I have removed the other forms keeping Sedoka double only, Thanks, deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2011 6:53:00 PM

Deb, this has beautiful imagery. Extra soupmail for you tonight!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/17/2011 2:48:00 PM

Very descriptive Debbie. Your fourth line contains eight syllables.