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Autumn’s moon over the woods shines white while I walk listening to nature’s sounds drifting throughout and the gravel below my feet. The shift of light embellishes trembling leaves a haunting feeling of dread overcomes me as pools of shadows cast across the ground. With anguish, wet mist and fever dew press a silence surge on my heart to pound fast, numb with fear I sit against a tree drawing my knees-up close to my chest laying my head down upon them wearily. Hearing a sound, I freeze drawing a short breath, I rise to my feet to see. Moving cautiously, branches creak and leaves rattle in flight a sharp breeze springs up slicing through the darkness. As I keep in the shadows from the faint glimmer of the moon, hoping that the blackness around me will leave soon. Weak with fear, and silent cries, tears trickle down my cheeks as the night dies. I say a small prayer as the rising sun brings streaks of blue skies. 9/17/2017

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Date: 2/9/2020 7:35:00 AM
Intensely riveting and scary. You took my breath away there for a moment. Thank the good Lord for the sweet guardians of the forest at night . Thank you for sharing, your talented pen, Have a beautiful day dear Eve xo
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Date: 9/17/2018 4:07:00 PM
Great writing, Eve. I see congrats down here but I don't know which contest it was entered in. To me, it looks like it would be entered in the emotion contest which is not judged yet. Did you win a different contest with it? It was well deserved!!~
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Date: 9/4/2018 9:32:00 AM
A lovely poem Eve...You captured it...and weaved it on screen...Enjoyed...All the best my friend
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:07:00 AM
Blessings and heart-felt congratulations on your win, Eve - wonderful work and well-earned, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/12/2017 8:20:00 AM
It is so well written it gives me the shivers! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/11/2017 10:45:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve on your fine win.
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Date: 10/11/2017 8:52:00 PM
Eve, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
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Date: 9/18/2017 1:51:00 PM
Very nice Eve. It's uncanny how the forest tricks one's senses at night. Taking away our sight we see with imagination adding flashes of darkness.
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Date: 9/18/2017 12:32:00 PM
Very well done, Eve, I feel like I am there, rustling the leaves underfoot!
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Date: 9/18/2017 10:10:00 AM
Oh Eve this is so good...rich in imagery and the rhymes are wonderful...a favorite for me
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Date: 9/18/2017 7:51:00 AM
Spooky and dark Eve.. Well written..
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Date: 9/18/2017 6:58:00 AM
Great imagery that brings out the darkness clearly, Eve:)
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Date: 9/18/2017 5:52:00 AM
A dark autumn night well illustrated in these beautiful lines--love the hopeful ending..blue skies and rising sun--good luck for a win Eve!
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Date: 9/17/2017 9:35:00 PM
Eve, this is truly an amazing write
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/17/2017 9:43:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady Hugs and Love Eve ~`*

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