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I Came Here For the Heart Ache

I came here for the heart ache What did you think Life was going to be a picnic That there was nothing left to learn Pay attention we can do this together We can change the world We can make it better

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2013 9:35:00 PM

Michael, a true heart to paste the world, with open minds and heart... an excellent win in Nathan's contest... Congrats! :-) xox~ LINDA

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 7/11/2013 9:29:00 AM

Together is the key, with it, one can move the mountain. Congrats on your win. AO

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 7/11/2013 9:34:00 AM

Togetherness... Typo!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/4/2013 1:06:00 PM

A thoughtful poem with deep meaning. Well done

Christine Phillips

Date: 5/3/2013 12:31:00 PM

Nice piece...indeed life is not a picnic. Nice arrangement of thoughts and idea.

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/3/2013 8:32:00 AM

This is a very touching piece. Nice approach to this!

Constance La France

Date: 5/3/2013 7:14:00 AM

Michael, I enjoyed reading your poem, the layout is interesting, well done and thanks for visiting my poetry, constance