I Came Here For the Heart Ache

I came here for the heart ache                                                                                                      What did you think                                                                                                                         Life was going to be a picnic                                                                                                          That there was nothing left to learn                                                                                               Pay attention we can do this together                                                                                           We can change the world                                                                                                                  We can make it better
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July 12, 2013 at 9:35 PM
Michael, a true heart to paste the world, with open minds and heart... an excellent win in Nathan's contest... Congrats! :-) xox~ LINDA
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July 11, 2013 at 9:29 AM
Together is the key, with it, one can move the mountain. Congrats on your win. AO
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July 11, 2013 at 9:34 AM
Togetherness... Typo!
Anglesey Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 1:06 PM
A thoughtful poem with deep meaning. Well done
Phillips Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 12:31 PM
Nice piece...indeed life is not a picnic. Nice arrangement of thoughts and idea.
Tacito Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 8:32 AM
This is a very touching piece. Nice approach to this!
La France Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Michael, I enjoyed reading your poem, the layout is interesting, well done and thanks for visiting my poetry, constance
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