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Being Here Without You

I am living in a world where the wind no longer blows through your hair my love And the warmth of the sun no longer falls upon your face Sometimes I feel like I am doing something wrong Being here without you As if someone is going to stop me in the mall and demand an explanation I know in my mind that for both of us I will carry on But sometimes my heart tries to rule the day Happy fortieth anniversary Sweetheart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/8/2013 8:30:00 PM
nice write here Michael, even if it's on the sad side,,,, thank you for reading Starry Night ;}
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Date: 7/30/2013 9:30:00 PM
Oh....Michael....I'm so sorry for your loss...though it's been so many years, the memories and the love live on to warm the heart. Yes, you must go on for her heart beats in your chest....Thanks for your visit to my work. Your post was endearing and sweet. I so appreciate it! I understand congratulations are in order for this win...I know I'm late....better late than never! :)
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/18/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thank you Eileen.
Date: 7/11/2013 6:52:00 AM
Michael, the scene evokes anguish and bittersweet emotions at the loss of a soul mate. I believe the deeply felt emotion makes it possible that she is by your side in these moments ...congrats on your win in the contest :)
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 7/11/2013 5:50:00 PM
Tnank You Karen
Date: 7/10/2013 4:06:00 PM
A poignant but very beautiful & sweet write this is my dear friend, Michael. So love it & enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing & MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR AWESOME WIN! love and hugs, Leonora
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 7/11/2013 5:53:00 PM
thank you Leonora
Date: 7/9/2013 3:44:00 PM
Congratulations on a most touching entry....Nicely done....Jake
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 7/11/2013 5:54:00 PM
Thanks John
Date: 7/9/2013 2:44:00 PM
Hi Michael....... Congratulations... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/19/2013 4:16:00 PM
Hello again Michael, This touches so very close to home. I am living your words. It is difficult at times but we carry on. The love Michael it continues always. This write is full of love, longing and emotion that we all must face eventually. I simply love this, it as I said hits very close to my heart...Smiles
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 7/11/2013 5:56:00 PM
Thanks Sharon
Date: 6/1/2013 8:59:00 AM
Damn. Kudos to you for writing this. Be assured that knowing you'll be able to still walk on, is the best thing you & your heart can do.
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 7/11/2013 5:57:00 PM
Thanks Drake
Date: 5/31/2013 1:00:00 PM
Wow touching longing poem in fab freeverse! Kudos.
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 7/11/2013 6:01:00 PM
So Kind,Thank you S.zaynub

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