Being Here Without You

I am living in a world where the wind no longer blows through your hair my love                         And the warmth of the sun no longer falls upon your face                                                             Sometimes I feel like I am doing something wrong                                                                                 Being here without you                                                                                                                      As if someone is going to stop me in the mall and demand an explanation                                     I know in my mind that for both of us I will carry on                                                                       But sometimes my heart tries to rule the day                                                                                 Happy fortieth anniversary Sweetheart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 8:30 PM
nice write here Michael, even if it's on the sad side,,,, thank you for reading Starry Night ;}
Manassian Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 9:30 PM
Oh....Michael....I'm so sorry for your loss...though it's been so many years, the memories and the love live on to warm the heart. Yes, you must go on for her heart beats in your chest....Thanks for your visit to my work. Your post was endearing and sweet. I so appreciate it! I understand congratulations are in order for this win...I know I'm late....better late than never! :)
Ainsley Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Thank you Eileen.
Anglesey Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 6:52 AM
Michael, the scene evokes anguish and bittersweet emotions at the loss of a soul mate. I believe the deeply felt emotion makes it possible that she is by your side in these moments ...congrats on your win in the contest :)
Ainsley Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 5:50 PM
Tnank You Karen
Gasun Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 4:06 PM
A poignant but very beautiful & sweet write this is my dear friend, Michael. So love it & enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing & MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR AWESOME WIN! love and hugs, Leonora
Ainsley Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 5:53 PM
thank you Leonora
Posey Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 3:44 PM
Congratulations on a most touching entry....Nicely done....Jake
Ainsley Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 5:54 PM
Thanks John
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July 9, 2013 at 2:44 PM
Hi Michael....... Congratulations... xox~ LINDA
Ruebel Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Hello again Michael, This touches so very close to home. I am living your words. It is difficult at times but we carry on. The love Michael it continues always. This write is full of love, longing and emotion that we all must face eventually. I simply love this, it as I said hits very close to my heart...Smiles
Ainsley Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 5:56 PM
Thanks Sharon
Tacito Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 8:59 AM
Damn. Kudos to you for writing this. Be assured that knowing you'll be able to still walk on, is the best thing you & your heart can do.
Ainsley Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 5:57 PM
Thanks Drake
Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 1:00 PM
Wow touching longing poem in fab freeverse! Kudos.
Ainsley Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 6:01 PM
So Kind,Thank you S.zaynub
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