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In order to obtain true freedom in our lives Close your eyes and see the light of an angel Wondering what this life is really all about That it will guide you to a brighter place without turns Thoughts about the night with a last kiss will be my end As night becomes desperate to sleep Tenderly rocked in your loving arms Seduced by the dark side hiding ghosts roam Desperation within hopeless pleas, the angel wings are broken After walking on coals fired inside aches burning It hurts so bad, the emotions of losing control Show me the way love in true heavenly beauties charm Let's break the chains burning without fire In your power shines a beacon starlight The pain, the demons leave inside causing our sins Strong within it's beam pierces through the gates of hell I can hardly breathe, in this dream where nobody dies Forgiving past sins kisses everything better The eyes are not blind, a rainbow of sorrow shines Breaking free from chains of a pain linked curse Could it be we have chosen exactly the right words of love I am not your resistance building castles in the sky without storms Born in the republic swept a\way within a dream swept away I'll walk with you through the age of eternities golden gate bridge A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 18.06.2016 (unrhymed Quatrain) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/16/2016 3:49:00 PM

Simply beautiful coll you two. A dark powerful poem and different from your usual ones. Awesome. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/17/2016 8:16:00 AM

- Thank you very much, glad you like it Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/8/2016 9:21:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise and Liam, I missed this one, but I'm glad I've read it now. This one's a most powerful dark collaboration for sure. The imagery is both palpable and demonstrative. Most Excellent!! TR/FAV!! Cheers and Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/8/2016 9:31:00 AM

- Glad you like it, although this is a bit dark poetry - Many thanks for the beautiful words, TR/FAV and friendly visit, dear Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/26/2016 1:11:00 PM

Love will overcome darkness always... I really enjoyed this beautiful poem with it's elements of both dark and light... Another great collaboration from you and Liam!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/26/2016 4:38:00 PM

- Kelly, thank you for friendly visits and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Tom Quigley

Date: 6/23/2016 8:18:00 PM

Great collaboration and beautiful write!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/24/2016 6:41:00 AM

- Tom, thank you for friendly visits and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/22/2016 10:19:00 AM

Excellent collaboration my lovely lovely friend. Both you are genius always. A nice 7. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2016 11:43:00 AM

- Bl, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Becca Teagan

Date: 6/22/2016 8:49:00 AM

This is amazing, an epic poem from you and Liam, you two work well together. Great job!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2016 8:55:00 AM

- Becca, thank you for friendly visits and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/20/2016 4:58:00 AM

Another marvel of your collaboration! A seven to each of you, Anne-Lise and Liam! Superbly written!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2016 7:20:00 AM

- Demetrios, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/19/2016 8:31:00 AM

Smooth like chocolate, dark and delicious! Great Colaboration.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2016 8:35:00 AM

.... When it comes to chocolate .... the dark is the best .... and even healthy :))) - Richard, thank you for friendly visits and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Constance La France

Date: 6/19/2016 7:58:00 AM

Sunshine, this is a BEAUTIFUL collaboration. You both did an ..a m a z I n g ...job penning this poem and I am "loving" it 7~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2016 8:11:00 AM

- B.W., thank you for friendly visits a 7 and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2016 8:14:00 PM

dark and beautiful one from you two. Interesting with unrhymed quatrains.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2016 7:07:00 AM

- Andrea, thank you for friendly visits and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/18/2016 5:05:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful, heartfelt, but very deep, and dark, mostly sad love poem, that you've painted here this time my dearest friends.!Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written in all its darkness, sadness and wide array of feelings and emotions.Just awesome!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Just amazing!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/19/2016 7:07:00 AM

- Dorian, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and beautiful comments on Liam's and my poems: - In The Power Of Death And The Depths Of Darkness - // hugs

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/18/2016 4:15:00 PM

thank you anne lise dear pal for the true pleasure of joining ink with me your a dear friend wishing you a blessing of a weekend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2016 4:30:00 PM

- Always a pleasure, my friend Liam :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/18/2016 4:14:00 PM

deep and stark; a greeat combination of moods for this theme.. another laurel for you and liam... happy father's day, anne and huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2016 4:38:00 PM

- A pleasure to share with you Nette, many thanks :) - (is not Father's Day in Norway this month) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)