30th September

Love how you portrayed the circle of life here, Harry ~

I see this one got a win, harry. Since I can't see any new poems, I came to this one to say belated congratulations.

Planting season for the southern hemisphere, eh Harry? Good luck with your garden :)

Light overcoming..A dark time arriving Harry A sharp contrast is shown in this apt piece.' I am seeing the long shadows, in my mind on The nullabor in June, on an early morning start Out from Penong we were, still a dirt road then Got stuck West from Yalata, and went back there to get shackles made to replace the broken ones, that had stranded us.' A whirl of Memories now around me.'

Just as the sundown is the ending of the yesterday, the sunrise is the beginning of something new. Congratulations on your win Harry.

So true Harry thank you for sharing my friend. Clever as always referencing the new birth to the season...

Nature seasons, one dies for one To be reborn congratulations on your win Harry my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Wow, it is such a lovely expression! The demise of the previous season is a prerequisite for every natural reborn, Harry. Be blessed

Interesting form, well written, Harry. I like the subject you chose and the twist in the final line. Thanks for sharing this unique Korean form of poetry, my friend. Bill

The beginning of each season is indeed the birth of something new... This is an interesting and unique take on the theme of changing seasons... Fantastic work, Harry!

so is line two the other story you were talking about? That's so cool.

So many layers to this short poem. Congratulations on your excellent win. SuZ

Congratulations on your stunning win! :)Paulette

Wow, Harry, this is artistic brilliance and made me pause to consider your words. Amazing write!

Harry! Your poetic artistry is so lovely here! Pangie xx

Was this a baby in your own family? I hope so. I was looking for poems about personal memories. Good one, harry . Congrats

What a beautiful way to put it Harry! A poetic cycle! Happy Thursday!!!

Fancy, a baby is born, Thank God for that.

Hello Harry Horseman, yes a baby is born today. Yet babies are born evrey day. Enjoy your day my friend.

Sir Harry, you left a powerful compliment on my recent poem, Absences. This Sijo also reveals depth, may, greater depth about Time, Cycles, Relativity. Shalom shalom of Jesus, The One. Amen. much love

A lovely verse, Harry. I believe I will be attempting this interesting new form. Best wishes for the contest.:)

You're in luck, Harry, because you'll soon be experiencing spring and summer while the rest of us will soon be bracing ourselves for colder weather. Excellent work here. Best of luck to you in the contest!

It's certainly starting to die here now Harry, you've got spring and summer to welcome. Tom